1st. 300
2nd. 150
3rd. 100
4th. 75
5th 50
I write mostly songs. Pick one that you think you will like and let me have it! Tell me what you really think! I want to know what you think it needs. I am not making money on them. Include title with entry and I will look for comments. Try to avoid one that has already been done for this contest.
Next, give me your best poem or song. You should only have one best. I will choose the entries I feel are best, but I am going to tear into them and try to find fault. I don't care about topic or language, but keep in mind, garbage is offensive. I only eat out of the trash occasionally, although I may sleep in it more often, hehe.
I really want your best work, so I can see if I can find ways to improve it. Especially if it is not making money. Same boat, you and I.
Andy
2nd. 150
3rd. 100
4th. 75
5th 50
I write mostly songs. Pick one that you think you will like and let me have it! Tell me what you really think! I want to know what you think it needs. I am not making money on them. Include title with entry and I will look for comments. Try to avoid one that has already been done for this contest.
Next, give me your best poem or song. You should only have one best. I will choose the entries I feel are best, but I am going to tear into them and try to find fault. I don't care about topic or language, but keep in mind, garbage is offensive. I only eat out of the trash occasionally, although I may sleep in it more often, hehe.
I really want your best work, so I can see if I can find ways to improve it. Especially if it is not making money. Same boat, you and I.
Andy
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 2, 2005
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: When judging, it was easy to see that I had lots of talented writers, but it was hard to see a clear first place. After reviewing several times, it went to Mythtress. 4th place was "A Thousand Times" by Pixie8409, 5th place was "Hotch Potch" by shimmerysoup, and an honorable mention to Apache 143 for "Down And Out" Thanks for participating.
Andy
Entries [6]
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We met one cold rainy Friday night
I had to help you out, I grabbed your arm tightby eXtremeEMT619 19 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 28 3:00 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
you show me
the meaning of my heart• Commented on by judge. -
The place where pasty clouds roam ginger skies
Where rivers sing and our earth never dries• Commented on by judge. -
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SERVANT OF SATAN
.........yes you really ARE!• Commented on by judge. -
by auralee 45 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 1 3:40 PM 2005. In Lyrics, Contemporary
Silver trophy winner
• Commented on by judge.
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Umm...Could you please be a bit more specific about what you want me to do with your songs? P.S. love the background!
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not sure if we where suppose to submit a song , poem, or story. i will assume (yes i know never very smart) that any type of write is acceptable. I will find a song to critic soon.
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I'm seeing $$$$
Okay: Sounds like there should be two entries.
$$$ First is a collaboration of sorts to enhance something you have already written so it will sell.
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* Second is our best write so you can give pointers of your own.
Hopefully, the combination equals $$$$ for us all.
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OK do you want the comments on your piece or as an entry in this contest And then you want our best piece so you can turn around and retuen the favor of ripping it apart sounds like fun I wont enter until I have picked one of yours read it and picked it from one end to the other and we will see if we can create something that will work and I doubt it will make us money but Hey what the hell LOL! You might be interested in www.recorddeal.com Get yourself a little exposure a variety of styles are listed there and it might be just what we need. I have signed up! And when we have some free time I would like to talk to you about a few things I think you and I could do in order to make a few Bucks LOL! Like the contest Idea by the way!
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I want you to pick one of my songs and tell me all you think is wrong with it. Things I should fix. I will do the same with your entry, song or poem.
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WOW you have a monster amount of entries good luck judging them!
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okies I am going to enter a poem and then come pick apart one of your songs.
I like the concept here, good contest you have
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I may be working on them until sunrise.
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Thanks But no thanks.. Tucks tiny tail and runs. Besides as the saying goes, Isn't one mans trash another man's treasure? Though your songs are nice I will say that.. I just am not up to have my one heart and soul song crucified.. Take Care, Catressa
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The idea was not to crucify, but to improve, if possible. Constuctive criticism, but something real. There were two I had nothing to suggest and most needed little change in my opinion.
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Thank you so much for the gold! It is my first gold trophy and I am so proud of it.... thank you so much! Congrats to the rest of the winners. Smiles.
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