well i guess my style is more about what im going though in my own life and no rhyme scheme what so ever (but im working on it ) i just come on here to reless thoughts and make my self feel a little better before i go to sleep and i know i dont have a lot of poems out yet but it is hard to write from your heart when u never have time to just sit and think
- Member since May 27, 2005.
- I'm a citrine experience poet for 180 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "to live is to die a thousand time a day".
- I am a 20 year old woman from Louisiana (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm air force troop.
- Visit my homepage at still working on one
- I have 180 comments, 2 contests, 34 poems, 2 stories
My Poetry
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I've been here for almost two months now and i still don't see how you love me as much as you say you do29 lines, August 20, 2007
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There are days when I wake up and think of you
There are days when I got to sleep and think of you34 lines, 2 comments, May 22, 2006. In Love
My Stories
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I can remember that day so well
we had plans to go out and I was744 lines, 2 comments, January 3, 2006. In 200-1500 lines, Fiction -
It was 6 o'clock and she was late. Late home from work,Late for dinner, and most of all, three weeks late with her period. Jane stumbled her way into the drug store and f593 lines, 9 comments, December 16, 2005. In <200 lines, Spiritual
Guest Book
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sad-but-true on April 17, 2006I see that you have gotten better with time. I wish you the best in your poetry. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. I think we have alot more in common after reading your words. Hugs to you.
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CelticKisses on December 6, 2005When I started I sucked at it too, most of my rhymes were forced, etc but my advice is to read as much as you can, both poetry and stories. That way you can extend your vocabulary and so therefore you have more words to 'choose' from if you want. www.rhymezone.com helps as well - just type in a word and it gives all it's rhyming words. The site can also be used as a dictionary and thesaurus too which is helpful. Good luck!
