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What is a terzanelle?

This is a pretty involved explanation that defines the terzanelle.

 


The terzanelle, invented by Lewis Turco in 1965, is a poetic form that combines the villanelle’s refrain with the terza rima’s end-line patterning. Turco’s "Terzanelle", the original terzanelle poem titled for the name of the form, was first published in the summer edition of The Michigan Quarterly Review that same year. He has since written and published three more terzanelle poems, "Terzanelle in Thunderweather" (The Book of Forms: University Press of New England, 2000), "The Room" (Poetry Miscellany, 1978), and "Terzanelle of the Spider’s Web" (The Southern Review, 1990).

 

Over the years, Turco’s invention has become well known and popular. Hundreds of terzanelle poems may be found on the web by as many authors. Although Turco’s "Terzanelle in Thunderweather" is often quoted as an example of the poem’s structure, it is seldom—if ever—mentioned that Turco is in fact the inventor of this form.

Here are the rules by which a terzanelle may be written:

1) The terzanelle is comprised of at least two tercets and a closing quatrain.

2) The first and third lines of the opening tercet are refrained as the second and fourth lines of the closing quatrain.

3) The terzanelle body is comprised of tercets that each refrain the second line of the preceding tercet for its third line. The first line of each of these tercets is rhymed with its refrained line.

4) There must be a minimum of one tercet for the body, but there may be as many tercets in the body as you think you can get away with.

I’m taking a liberty here in defining the terzanelle body. While Turco created the terzanelle as a fixed form of 19 lines (four tercets in the body), it seems clear to me the terzanelle is stanzaic in nature. As such, I imagine the terzanelle may be expanded or contracted at will so long as the rhyme and refrain of the body are not compromised in the process.

5) The closing quatrain refrains the second line of the last tercet as its third line and rhymes its first line with that refrain.

6) Lines may be in any length or meter within reason.

7) Terzanelles may be written on any subject.

 

Again, there is a pleasant shorthand notation for the first five points above. For a 19 line terzanelle, this would be A1B1A2,bC1B1,cD1C1,dE1D1,eF1E1,fA1F1A2, where like letters indicate the rhyme scheme, and uppercase letters followed by a superscript numeric notation indicate the refrains.

 

As with the villanelle, one of the primary challenges with the terzanelle is finding a way to change the meaning or context of each refrain. In one way the terzanelle is a little easier than the villanelle in that there is a fresh refrain to work with for each tercet. In another way the terzanelle is much more difficult than the villanelle because the refrains from the opening tercet need to be woven in with a refrain from the final tercet in the quatrain. This alone has proven to be the most challenging aspect of the terzanelle for me.

A note on rhyme: I often use alternative prosodic devices in place of rhyme. Such devices include consonance, assonance, and alliteration. I also often combine different prosodic devices. For instance, one set of lines might use end-line assonance while another set uses end-line consonance.

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  • ma belle
    January 13, 2006
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    You have been very helpful. I do support Turco's rendering! I am taking a class that is teaching the 'terzanelle type b' yet, allowing me to choose the weapon of my choice!

  • Zahhar gold member
    January 13, 2006
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    Wikipedia: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Terzanelle

    same parameters, just offers an alternative closing quatrain (the villanelle closing) if you choose to go for it. since Lewis Turco invented the terzanelle, and since he never used the villanelle closing, i think it's safe to assume that this alternate closing is a deviation from the terzanelle itself, though this doesn't mean it shouldn't be done. you can call it a "terzanelle type b" if you like, kind of like the way i designed two differnet patterns for the hybridanelle [type A and type B].

    Shadowpoetry: www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/terzanelle.html

    also same parameters with the alternate villanelle ending.

    i think the difference you're seeing is my use of superscript numbers to annotate refrains. these are necessary to differentiate refrains from rhyme schemes. without this extra information, the information can become unclear. there are, after all, two different refrained lines under the a rhyme scheme. if i just say "A" to indicate that it's a refrain, then this could be misinterpreted as meaning that all occurences of "A" must be the same refrain. if i say "A1" and "A2" then this is clearer because now you see that "A" is a refraining line under the a end-line rhyme scheme, and the number indicates which lines are repeated where.

    another handy thing about this is, say you want to modify the terzanelle into a more elaborate scheme that includes other parts. say you want to indicate the scheme for a three part poem, consisting of three terzaelles, but you want to reuse the second line of one part as the first line of the next--using the numeric indicators would allow you to clarify the scheme very precisely:

    Part 1: A1 B1 A2; b C1 B1; c D1 C1; d E1 D1; e F1 E1; f A1 F1 A2

    Part 2: B1 G1 B2; g H1 G1; h I1 H1; i J1 I1; j K1 J1; k B1 K1 B2

    Part 3: G1 L1 G2; l M1 L1; m N1 M1; n O1 N1; o P1 O1; p G1 P1 G2

    now, try to annotate something that complex without numeric indicators to clarify the refrain lines from the rhyme scheme.


    another disappointing thing about shadowpoetry's description is that it makes no attempt to offer some information about the origins, history, and development of the terzanelle. i've always found these dry, unconfirmed "form guides" to be a bit questionable. without the origins and history, it's just some form guide with an example, and you could really call it anything, like "Spieling's Leapfrog Tercet Form". wikipedia has an excuse... no-one's gotten around to providing detailed information along with a sorting of examples thus far.
    Edited on Jan 13, 9:10 because ''.

  • ma belle
    January 13, 2006
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    Thank you for clarifying the terzanelle body. One other quick question: ShadowPoetry and Wikipedia give the terzanelle different parameters; in other words, an entirely different rhyming format. Why is this?
    Edited on Jan 13, 9:06 because 'plural verb'.

  • Zahhar gold member
    January 13, 2006
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    there's the opening tercet, which is comprised completely of lines that will be refrained. there's the closing quatrain, which repeats two of those lines. then there's the four tercets in between. the tercets in between are consistent in that they each repeat the second line from the tercet above as its third line, and that they don't open or close the poem. when expanding or collapsing a terzanelle, the structure of the opening and closing tercets would remain unaffected, and no matter how many body tercets you had in the poem, they're structures would be consistent.

    hope this helps.

  • ma belle
    January 13, 2006
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    "I’m taking a liberty here in defining the terzanelle body. While Turco created the terzanelle as a fixed form of 19 lines (four tercets in the body), it seems clear to me the terzanelle is stanzaic in nature. As such, I imagine the terzanelle may be expanded or contracted at will so long as the rhyme and refrain of the body are not compromised in the process."

    QUESTION? In your quote above, shouldn't that read "(five tercets in the body)"?

  • Ivory Pyre
    May 2, 2005
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    A very interesting column.. I'm intruiged now by this form.
  • Smegerson
    January 17, 2005
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    incredibly comprehensive and useful guide

    Thanks so much for your really comprehensive guides on form poetry. i will probably give up after the second tercet, but im going to try anyway. i think anyone that reads this should feel obliged to applause. thanks again.
  • CleverNameHere
    December 17, 2004
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    I was brought here by your poem Pestilence. I loved that poem and I;m so glad that you went out of your way to post information on this very appealing form of poetry. Thanks so much.

  • Zahhar gold member
    December 12, 2004
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    if you read "The Phantom of Wheeler Camp" all the way through, then you've seen one clear example in part two. this article is part of my "Terzanelles" list, in which I have a number of terzanelles posted: allpoetry.com/list/6692

    The other place where I have two more terzanelles is in a poem I called "The Lotus Tree" ( allpoetry.com/Poem/733886 ), which is so far my only piece of writing I feel actualy shows a glimmer of my potential.

    anyway, glad youre perusing. look forward to more of your thoughts as you have them.

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    December 12, 2004
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    Thank you for sharing this. I never knew of these forms of poetry until today. Thanks alot. Would love to see some examples of these.

  • QueenMaab gold member
    September 16, 2004
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    This is a fantastic teaching column. I wish more people would hop on the 'learn how to write a 'real' terzanelle' bandwagon. It's answered many of my questions and I thank you for posting it. I hope more people will drop on by.
    ~Bezoar
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