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Performers (Engaging Your Audience); Judges (Understanding Your Role In Judging)

Okay folks, you have a week to prepare for the AP Slam. One of the best things you can do is to read this column. In fact i strongly suggest that you do not t
Okay folks, you have a week to prepare for the AP Slam.  One of the best things you can do is to read this column.  In fact i strongly suggest that you do not try to perform in the slam without reading this column ahead of time.  It will tell you what is expected of you in your performance.  Judges - you will want to read this too.  It will help you to understand your role in judging the contest!!

This particular slam that I am putting on differs a little bit from the type of slam you might enter at your local nightclub.  In an off site slam you are expected to bring with you prewritten poetry that you will perform in front of a live audience.  However, for this on-line slam, i am combining the tradition of slam and rap together.  You will be both expected to write and perform your poetry in under 5 minutes for the first round, and under 3 minutes for the second round.  It is very high pressured, and will be a process that will hopefully leave only the most serious quick poets remaining.  

Do NOT be hard on yourself if you do not perform well in your first slam.  This is the first AP slam in history after all, and thus you are all guinea pigs as I will evaluate the slam in detail after it is over.  There are always unforeseen problems the first time around for anything, and thus this is a process of learning for both me, and all you who perform in the slam.  

The big question is how can you prepare for participating in this slam.  
The utmost important point to remember in performing at a slam is that you are engaging the audience.  You want to be in as much control of how you do this as possible.  This is what this article is going to hopefully help you with.  The better you understand it, the more effective you will be on stage.

You have probably heard the saying, "actions speak louder than words".  In a slam, your words ARE your actions.  You must communicate with your words, effectively, artfully, honestly, and enthusiastically so that you move your audience.  Memorize these four words.  They are very important concepts.

MOVING YOUR AUDIENCE

The goal in a slam is to move your audience.  Doing your very best is the means to this goal.  You have two audiences that you will be communicating with - both are absolutely critical to your success.  However both will be evaluating you differently, so you must keep this in mind at all times.  Lets look at both these audiences.

THE PUBLIC

The first audience is the general audience.  The people in this crowd are NOT expert poets- they are your public.  The public is very important!!!  Your job is to entertain them.  They will judge you by how well you entertain them, be assured.  It doesn't matter if you have perfect poetry form and use the most elaborate techniques- you can still get booed off the stage by the public.  You must keep entertainment in mind at all times.  

So what do we mean by entertainment?  What does this word bring to mind?  Laughter?  I think that is an immediate association in most people's minds.  And so I need to shatter it, right now, because it will backfire on you as a performer in this slam.  Entertainment is not necessarily about laughing or riling up an audience frenzy.  When you go to a movie, and tears stream down your cheeks, or when you feel a jolt of fright that stays with you for the next week, YOU have been entertained.  Entertainment covers the whole range of emotions.  

In a slam you want to consciously create the entertainment effect you want in the audience.  The point is not to manipulate them (people aren't stupid ) - but to engage them.  That is why I included honesty in the 4 points I told you to memorize.  No one likes to be manipulated.  People love to be engaged however, and that is what you can have a big part in creating.  You do not want to be surprised by the audience's reaction.  You want to do everything in your poetry to create the reaction that you intend to.  Please take a moment to read my latest poem, which I wrote for the purposes of helping you to understand what slam is all about:  

all-poetry.com/Poem/757034

I wrote this in under three minutes using only one hint from the contest holder:  ESCAPE.  This is exactly what you will need to do.  Now I kept this bare boned.  I did not make use of poetry techniques, nor did I deliberately try to engage the audience in my writing.  As a result I got a whole range of responses - from 'very funny' all the way to 'this is different', to what I wanted, 'this is emotionally powerful'.  Each person reads through their own lens, and if you are writing poetry for yourself, then you really don't care how they react.  But for a slam, you MUST care!!!  Using your poetry skills and your personality you can shape this atmosphere of reaction, instead of being surprised by it.  It is imperative that you do so, since the public reaction will effect your score.  

THE 5 RANDOMLY SELECTED JUDGES

This is your second audience, which you must cater to in the very same moment and with the same poem as the public audience.  Both audiences are critical, and both will be weighed in the scoring equally.  I must reiterate that 'expert' is not 'better'.  Both yield their own power.
The judges will judge you on a scale of 1 to 10, taking into account both your performance and the content of your poem.  All three elements will be judged on the same scale, averaged together for a final score.  You can read more about this in the column on judging. But for this audience you will want to keep in mind perfect form, spelling, grammar, poetry techniques etc.  These elements may in fact be very important to the general audience as well of course, but here they are being formally, and objectively, evaluated.  The public score will be solely on the subjective appreciation of the audience.

WHAT YOU CAN DO

As I have mentioned, you can not be in control of audience reaction at all times.  For example in my poem 'No Escape'- which I deliberately posted for an illustration for this slam - I got a reaction that I would never have expected in a million years, even if I HAD tried to shape public reaction to it.  One commenter found this line funny:

cold Nazis
disguised as family

He said it was so funny that it took the 'edge off the poem'.

Is that what I intended?  No.  Could I have done something to change his reaction?  Probably not.  So reaction isn't always in your control.  But the better you know yourself, the better you understand and apply the skills of poetry, and the more honest you are in whatever you are writing, the more likely you are to get a reaction that doesn't surprise you.  The following points will help you in your performance if you keep them in mind at every stage in the competition.

SPEAKING

It is true that the only mediums we have for the slam is the printed page, and the space around it.  (DON'T underestimate space!  But that will be discussed later).  Be assured that you will be speaking loudly and clearly (whether it is what you intend to say or not), through the microphone of your poetry.  So be sure that you are consciously in control of what you are saying.  Being aware of the following elements
will help you:

1) Articulating - Articulation does not mean using big words!!!  It means using words appropriate to your context and audience, and having the range and skill to do this.  It is a skill that is developed.  Keep it in mind when you are in each stage of the competition.  

2) Tone-  Try to use an appropriate tone for what you are writing, and for the effect you want to have.  Tone can engage the audience or totally turn them off.  As well, tone is the key to either exciting an audience or subduing the crowd.  It all depends on your intent.

3) Tempo- Be consciously in control of the speed of your poetry.  You can speed it up or slow it down on purpose through the use of language and poetry techniques.  You may not always want to have the same speed throughout the poem.  You can have a lot of fun with using this!!

4) Gesture- Yes, you can gesture even on-line without using emotives.  The screen is your body, and your personal space.  Use it to your advantage!!  Gesture can dramatically affect your audience.  You can gesture through the use of structure, spacing, silences, words, pauses, and all the above elements we have already spoken of.  

THE BOTTOM LINE

You the performer want to create the audience atmosphere as much as possible, not be surprised by it.  Hopefully this article helped you in this endeavor.  

FINAL POINTS

Here are some concrete things you can do to prepare for the slam:

1) Memorize:  Effective, Artful, Enthusiastic, Honest
2) Be sure that you are well grounded in poetry devices, forms, and techniques.  Not only will they help you create the effect you want, but they will be scored, AND the second half of the show will be directly testing you on these things!!  So judges- make sure you are up on these things as well!
3) I suggest that you read over the itinerary very carefully, and make sure that you are grounded in all the techniques you will be asked to perform with on the spot.
4) Enter Contests!  Practice all the things in this article by writing and posting poetry in under three minutes.  Join contests, and write on their subject in three minutes or less - this will give you EXCELLENT practice. You can also then see how your audience reacts, and rewrite the piece to see if you can shape and get the reaction you would like.

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  • poetryality silver member
    August 14, 2004
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    I think I can...

    I think I can...

    I know I can
    I know I can
    I know I can...

  • godoffood
    August 14, 2004
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    OK.
    How can we perform it online?

  • DefinitiveFreak
    August 13, 2004
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    Woah, very very exciting stuff. I can't wait to get stuck in... Even if I don't get far in it, it will be fantastic experience! I'm a sponge ready to soak up the poetic knowledge!

  • dehydrated
    August 13, 2004
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    classic...so where are the performers...i can't wait!!

  • g r e y i s m gold member
    August 12, 2004
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    I read it and it sounds good so far.

  • poetryality silver member
    August 12, 2004
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    I have entered many slams in my poetic career. I only won once because I was much younger. These days the younger poets are beating out the "old school" poets. I don't know what role I want to play yet. I will keep reading the columns and then decide.

  • kitty-cat81897
    August 11, 2004
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    Interesting... I have done a slam poem once or twice in my poetry class, a few years back. but nothing like this... I hope I can get thruogh it all!
    kitty
  • Lune Feu
    August 11, 2004
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    As a member of the audience, I have read this and am confirming it!

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    August 11, 2004
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    Fie Fie the Fiddle Flies!

    Fie! Fie! the fiddle flies
    and the beat takes me away
    Heaven holds her ears and hell sighs
    as Fie! Fie! The fiddle sings!

    Will the shriek of banshees bust
    or the tune of angels squeal
    and what say you on a fiddle high
    as fie! Fie! the fiddle sighs?

    2 minutes 37 seconds
    Word: Fiddle

    Flick and snap and fire dances
    The breeze sweeps and burns
    The breath of blaze yet entrances
    as for flesh to eat it yearns

    The elegance of such ballet
    smooth and sexily sways
    What wind won't wisk
    and comsume the risk
    to drink 'till drunk the saffron
    seduction steeped in ballet 'till gone?

    2 minutes 44 seconds
    Word: candle

    Nerves awake and frayed upon
    as your breath tickles near
    All reserve has fled and gone
    Heartbeats are what I hear

    Nothing remains and nothing left
    and nothing but nerves remain
    My thoughts have fallen to a theft
    and my body has gone insane!

    1 minutes 57 seconds
    Word: Kiss

    Puffing, snaking, coiling billow
    soft and caressing like a pillow
    swirling, twirling round my head
    tricking me into realms of deaad

    Draging, gagging choking might
    the body fills and burns my sight
    I suck upon the wand of death
    and each drag pulls me nearer death

    2 minutes 22 seconds
    Word: Cigarette

    Sleep comes to sweep
    whilst sand grinds my eyes
    Unsettled though deep
    deeper than I realize

    Tonic gone to my brain
    to drown away memory
    Anoint the wretched pain
    and bring me back to me

    Kill the lonelyness inside
    that echoes through my head
    I feel as if I've already died
    and perchance I'm truly am dead.

    2 minutes 41 seconds

    Word: sleep

    Swan sillk sways the air
    and feather dusts the breeze
    dandelion threads gone bare
    and seductively tease

    Arms wraped invibly
    and toes to twisted away from me
    Around 'n round
    the flight of swans in dance
    the spinning silent sweetest sound
    is ballet's sweet trance.

    Word: Ballet

    3 minutes 28 seconds...TOO LONG!
  • pepperella
    August 9, 2004
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    I am printing this.... i am printing this...

  • JenP
    August 9, 2004
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    I totally understand this.

  • wynt3r
    August 9, 2004
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    Gosh this is going to be hard i don't know if i can do this and do it good.I'm scared now.Thanks for the tips though.
    Mandi

  • QueenMaab gold member
    August 9, 2004
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    Okay. I've read through this column and I'm pretty sure I understand how it works. I'm planning to attend in the audience but I know I'm qualified to be a judge. Can you tell me how the "random" judges will be picked? I'm a little unclear on that point. I'll read the next three columns though and probably find the answer.
    ~Bezoar
  • surfermike
    August 9, 2004
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    hmm . .daunting allowing others to see your warts . .
    _
    i just write . .lol . no form knowledge . .just write . . forgive me

  • Darianna
    August 9, 2004
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    I so badly want to join this slam!!! Dari xxx

  • Duana gold member
    August 9, 2004
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    You can do it!!! Rememebr this is the first time for everyone all around, so just have fun is the name of the game!
  • SouthernPoet
    August 9, 2004
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    I have never entered a contest like this. I hope I can live up
    to some expectations...got me a little scared here people.
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