How can I ever restore
The faith you hold inside this glass locket,
a new moon has just risen on the horizon
a new star has fallen to the shore
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When you close your eyes tonight,
dreaming your sweet tomorrow
know I will be beside you
In darkness, sorrow and every golden hour
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My love waits patiently
for you to come to my window
my heart dreams only of you
to rapture your golden amber in light of a new day
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To whisper your name
while rapping my hands in the fold of your hair
kissing the beckoning heat of this day aside
Bringing you back to our life
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We have a life-time for our joy to unfold
but this night, I call for your special touch
So tenderly, you kiss all my fears astray
this night shall quench all tears away
Amazing what a full moon can do!
I offer you the Terzanelle style by Scindr
Love Anon and Love Refrained
How can I ever repay
The gentle kind thing you do
The gentle kind thing you do
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This is a beautiful sentiment, and lovely description.
There is a bit of trouble with the spelling, and the spell checker will not correct Wrapping in line 14. I'm not sure what you mean by "smolten".
Thanks for your lovely comment.
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keep coming back to this one....sighhhhhh....really makes me sighhhhhhhh -
don't touch it!
You have a unique style all your own... so refreshing and true. -
don't touch it!
really enjoyed my visit to read your write will have to come more often and explore some more...ty for your visit to my world. -
don't touch it!
I love the words of a bonded pair meeting under an amber sky. Romance dances in rhythm with the two within a lovely poem. -
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So full of love and passion...under the light of the full moon, shooting stars...the imagery is superb...beautifully written!! :)) -
what an honor you bestow on my little whim of words
thank you all for you comments and visit -
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Beautifully done! Word choice is so excellent (unlike the word choice for my commentary..ha!) I'm running out of adjectives to describe your work, Tamara. Each one is better than the last, each a delight, and I can't wait for the next..... -
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This was beautiful! Full of love, with a wonderful flow to it :) -
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so delicate and sensitive, Tamara ..
truly a loving, calming, seductive write .. -
Haunt me misty silver moon,
for I am smoke and glass.
Born to vanish all to soon,
and none to see me pass.
The very air sings to me there,
and her loving arms invite.
I ride in a dream with my angel fair,
On a magic moonlit night...............Your precious,rare -
Very, very beautiful. To treasure forever.
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humm loved this..
I love to look up and see the face... picture him smiling at me... I swear once I saw him wink at me :)
man in the moon
hold my hand
make me smile
make me dream
so i will want
to stay for
just a little
while....
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yes Deb, you may borrow and thank you all for the visits and lovely comments.....
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Ah yes...promise of true love abounds in this...very sweet.
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'tis true the power of the full moon holds over us and inspires are deepest heart
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simply wonderful
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WOW Tamara...Can I borrow it please??? LOL...I would like to send a copy to my hubby! I think he would love this!!! Wonderful write of love you have penned! :)
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Sweet writing tamara,
Very enjoyable read, keep it going. :o)
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this is stunning tamara
beautifuly orcestrated
I LOVE the moon
weather full or but wink half opened in the sky
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Excellent write Tam...loverly!=D
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Very beautiful, well written. Kelly
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this is loves embrace,,, fantastic
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hell yeah the moon is great. nomatter where your at the other person could be looking at the moon at the same time and then its truely special. great poem.
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