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Lord of the Rings Checklist for Evaluating Poetry

As yourself some of the following questions while you are reading poetry:
by Gregg Rowe

Ask yourself some of the following questions
while you are reading poetry:
 
What is the SUBJECT of the poem?

What is the THEME of the poem?  
What is do you respond to it?

Is the poem DIVIDED into stanzas and why there?  
Is there ENJAMBMENT
(the breaking of one line
to the next to keep the
poem flowing instead of one full sentence)?   Why?
(The above sentence was an example of enjambment)!

Are there obvious CONTRASTS between the sections?
What purpose to you think the NARRATOR did this for?

How is LANGUAGE used?
Is it FORMAL, INFORMAL, COLLEGIAL?  
What is the DIALECT of the voice?
 
Who is the SPEAKER of the poem?
The speaker is the ‘I’ of the poem and not
necessarily the author is the SPEAKER in high poetry.  
What is his/her PUPOSE or problem?

How is the poem typical of its HISTORICAL period?
What tips you off?  
This means are there clues hidden in the poem that speak of
POP CULTURE, SOCIAL AND POLITICAL SITUATIONS, etc.

What is the METER: how effective is it?
Or ineffective?

TO WHOM  is the poem addressed?

Do you note use of
ALLITERATION, CONSONANCE, ASSONANCE
in the poem?  
What is its effect?

What kind of poem is it?
NARRATIVE, BALLAD, ELEGY,LYRIC, SONNET, ODE, etc.?
What tips you off?

Does the poem use:
IMAGERY
(the use of the five senses --
touch, see, taste, hear, smell --
to tap into your abstract feelings)?  
SYMBOLISM
(one object to represent something else:
i.e.  a bitten apple juxtoposed next to  a woman
in a fig leaf becomes a symbol of
‘The Garden of Eden’)?

Does the poet use FREE VERSE?
Why this technique rather than a "set" form?

How is the FORM of the poem conducive/appropriate to its subject?

Does the poem have LINES of varying length?
What is the narrator achieving here?  
Do any lines or words seem set apart?
Why?

Do YOU LIKE the poem?
Why or why not?

Are there any ALLUSIONS?
How do they function?



These are the questions I ask myself
when I read someone else’s works.

I would also like to note
that sometimes I do not
make a comment on the first
reading, I think that commenting
on a poem right away takes
away from enjoying and savouring it.  
Sometimes it will take up to
three readings in which
I divide the process up in the
following internalization of the poem:

 1. First Reading  
 
to hear the voice,
feel the language and
get a first feel of the poem

 2. Second Reading  
 
to go deeper and see if I missed out something
in the first reading,
now I’m looking closely at
theme, rhythm, meter and balance
(also extra spelling and grammatical errors missed in first).

 3. Third Reading  
 
to finally get into the poem and
feel what the writer has written
but from experiences and cultural
background, integrating theirs into
mine and to see if the words
really swept me away.

A NOTE ABOUT TITLES AND FIRST LINES:  
that is what the reader
is going to be attracted to
right from the beginning --
a title that draws them into
and an opening image that will
grab them to go further.  
That’s a good starting point.
I am posting these columns for the benefit of those who wish to follow my process of writing poetry, the techniques and questions I ask myself.  I know there is a lot of information on this site already concerning these, but these are personal guidelines I have adapted throughout my writing career and now am comfortable critiquing poetry with these guidelines.

Included in the list

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  • pozo
    February 11, 2006
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    Very good advice
    All the best
    Pozo


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    July 3, 2004
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    I found this helpful for the third time that I read this. I read this when it was first posted, but didn't comment. I actually read several time so I can become a before critic on poetry. I been using your techinques on critiquing, and I been using your hints in writing poems also. I haven't all of them, but I will. I want my work perfected before I posted up here. Or atleast have a feel to it. Let say mentor, that I been trying to improve my writing. Make it more appealing to all the senses, and make a pleasure to behold. Sorry, I have the tendency to ramble. I just like to say thank you Gregg, for everything that you have taught me through your work.


  • fishingwitch2
    April 28, 2004
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    A worthy post. I must say, Gregg, you have taught me a million bucks worth over the past year. I thank you, my friend, and good luck.


  • Paint Me Beautiful
    April 28, 2004
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    Great advice. It does sound a bit like an english assignment though, I must agree with Arcaenne


  • MargaretG
    April 28, 2004
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    helpful

    This is a good guide to more systematic reading and commenting. These are things that I would do for a poem I like! Though a good poem may turn me off, once off, I don't wish to spend anymore time with it. There is no accounting for taste.


  • blondeoverblue
    April 28, 2004
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    Thanks for this really helpful info. Although it's great to get feedback and comments on my own poems, I'm always at a loss to say anything constructive or otherwise to other poets. I don't think that is their fault in any way and columns like this are great in giving some insight into where to begin when reading other's works. Thank you, I personally have found it really helpful.

    Kat xxxx


  • astralshepherd gold member
    April 28, 2004
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    oops, sorry i thot this was a poem...i saw it in the featured thingy. i didnt mean to take the points. so i read this and found it very helpful and i thank you for the information. Blessing, ~richard


  • Arcaenne
    April 28, 2004
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    Hmm... sounds a bit like an english essay to me ... but thanks for the advice. It is really useful, since I often find it hard to know what to say about a poem, so thanks. Will try to write better critiques in future!

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