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what do you think?

Yeah, this is where you click on this and comment....lol
 
(stealing this from angela.)
 
what do you honestly think of my writing?

how does it make you feel?
how would you completely describe it?

i want to know everything.
feel free to criticize, appreciate, love, hate.

 

 

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  • apbluefairy
    October 15
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    Why now do you have an interest in asking us how your writing is? Do you doubt your ability to create amazing works of literature? Because I don't. And neither should you. I love it that every time I'm on here, it shows me that you have something new to read, and truthfully I smile every time that I see you have something new. I am curious to know why you ask now, when you've been writing for a long time? It's not the opinion of others that should make the call on your writings, but you, the writer having the final say, in what is important. And in the end, all that really matters is: did you write/say it like you wanted to?


  • Blackbird Writer
    October 15
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    I love your writing. Some is better then others, you have good days and bad days. You have a great talent with imagery. Sometimes I want to know why you wrote a certain poem. I love your abstract works, they are by far your best in my opinion, they remind me of the Beatles in their Sgt. Pepper stage.


  • new born
    October 14
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    I think you're extremely good, first of all. um...I think your abstract work is definitely your best. I think in your prose, (first person, not super-abstract) you could work on making it sound a little more natural, but overall just keep doin' what you're doin', because it's fantastic.

    • Like, what do you mean "more natural"? Could you elaborate?

      • new born
        October 15
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        Just more like the character's thoughts, with contractions, carefully used slang, etc. It could just be me being ocdpicky, though, so don't worry about it.

        • Well a lot of it probably has to do with the fact that I haven't really educated myself in "proper grammar/punctuation" rules. idk.


  • Not-The-Sun
    October 13
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    how would you completely describe it?


    amazing prose with a slam of magnificent poetry embedded within your words.


  • raggyann
    October 13
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    i think you are a composer a writer a music maker
    and a true wonder


  • Beatles Girl
    October 13
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    i think you are a genius. nothing else could say it.
    have a nice day =D
    -K

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