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August Morning by Albert Garcia: American Life in Poetry #71

William Carlos Williams, one of our country's most influential poets and a New Jersey physician, taught us to celebrate daily life. Here Albert Garcia offers us the simple pleasures and modest mysteries of a single summer day.

August Morning

It's ripe, the melon
by our sink. Yellow,
bee-bitten, soft, it perfumes
the house too sweetly.
At five I wake, the air
mournful in its quiet.
My wife's eyes swim calmly
under their lids, her mouth and jaw
relaxed, different.
What is happening in the silence
of this house? Curtains
hang heavily from their rods.
Ficus leaves tremble
at my footsteps. Yet
the colors outside are perfect--
orange geranium, blue lobelia.
I wander from room to room
like a man in a museum:
wife, children, books, flowers,
melon. Such still air. Soon
the mid-morning breeze will float in
like tepid water, then hot.
How do I start this day,
I who am unsure
of how my life has happened
or how to proceed
amid this warm and steady sweetness?



American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Poem copyright © by Albert Garcia from his latest book “Skunk Talkâ€? (Bear Starr Press, 2005) and originally published in “Poetry East,â€? No. 44. Reprinted by permission of the author. Introduction copyright © 2009 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction's author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.

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  • taylorndncar gold member
    October 4
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    i have often wondered, what a known poem likes like before the editors get a hold of it and move things around to fit their columns and space. even the ones i sold to newspapers and magazine have been published without my witnessing the "surgery-scars"! this piece is brilliant in its simplicity, but much too long without a breaking-device! i can almost feel the scars...!


  • yellowsub
    October 3
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    Hmmm... such a sense of wonder. What is next? What led me to this point in life? Where am I going? Am I happy? Do I know what I want? What is left to do with so much already done? What does life have in store?

    Is there anything else, other than death?

    Beautiful!

  • There is no how.....only to proceed, taking in as much as you can as life comes your way.

    How softly, sticky sweet at times, with a hint of a sour flavor. Beautiful, truly.

    Sincerely,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


  • Lowell Poe
    October 3
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    As stunning,
    as an August morning.
    Some dragged out minutia,
    but was successful at creating the atmosphere.

    Bless his
    summer heart,
    Liam


  • Tmiller248
    October 3
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    I love this, the feeling of being a part of but seperate from the things around you, noticing everything with senses heightened and wondering how to become a part of it. Leaves me wanting to read more.


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 3
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    Lovely poem; the insistence on looking at the things around him describe his life to date as he feels it - over-ripe maybe, and I'm taken by the tension in the lines 'her mouth and jaw
    relaxed, different' which lets me know she's usually tense. He feels alientated from this 'warm and steady sweetness', as if he longs for excitement but doesn't know how to proceed towards it.

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