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Homecoming by Keith Althaus: American Life in Poetry #65

Visiting a familiar and once dear place after a long absence can knock the words right out of us, and in this poem, Keith Althaus of Massachusetts observes this happening to someone else. I like the way he suggests, at the end, that it may take days before that silence heals over.
Homecoming

We drove through the gates
into a maze of little roads,
with speed bumps now,
that circled a pavilion,
field house, and ran past
the playing fields and wound
their way up to the cluster
of wood and stone buildings
of the school you went to once.
The green was returning to
the trees and lawn, the lake
was still half-lidded with ice
and blind in the middle.
There was nobody around
except a few cars in front
of the administration. It must
have been spring break.
We left without ever getting out
of the car. You were quiet
that night, the next day,
the way after heavy rain
that the earth cannot absorb,
the water lies in pools
in unexpected places for days
until it disappears.



American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Reprinted from "Ladder of Hours: Poems 1969-2005," Ausable Press, Keene, N.Y., 2005, by permission of the author. Copyright © 2005 by Keith Althaus. Introduction copyright © 2009 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction's author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.

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  • James Holdaway
    September 22
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    Been there - done that

    Driven half way across the country only to find I didn't want to be there. The author has captured the mood very well.


  • PrincessOfFire
    September 20
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    We all want to go back to the good old days only we've grown up and life has change not only us but the memory. You look at it and all the same, you think. Suddenly memories arent as clear. Then comes the silence from the shock and surprise. Thanks for sharing Rose


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    September 20
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    This poem reminds me so of when I return home and visit my old university, Southeastern La. U. All except the ice covered lake. There's no lake on this campus. My favorite part is:
    the gates
    into a maze of little roads,
    with speed bumps now,
    that circled a pavilion,
    field house, and ran past
    the playing fields and wound
    their way up to the cluster
    of wood and stone buildings
    of the school you went to once.
    How nice it is to remember those days. Thank you for this experience.

  • nsmurty
    September 20
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    The green was returning to
    the trees and lawn, the lake
    was still half-lidded with ice
    and blind in the middle.

    This is fine expression. Other poets would normally be tempted to mention Spring in some way and the 'half-lidded' is a good picturesque description.