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Camping Out by Edwin Grant Burrows: American Life in Poetry #23

In this fine poem about camping by Washington poet E. G. Burrows, vivid memories of the speaker's father, set down one after another, move gracefully toward speculation about how experiences cling to us despite any efforts to put them aside. And then, quite suddenly, the father is gone, forever. But life goes on, the coffee is hot, and the bird that opens the poem is still there at its close, singing for life.

Camping Out

I watched the nesting redstart
when we camped by Lake Winnepesaukee.
The tent pegs pulled out in soft soil.
Rain made pawprints on the canvas.

So much clings to the shoes,
the old shoes must be discarded,
but we're fools to think that does it:
burning the scraps.

I listened for the rain at Mt. Monadnock,
for the barred owl on a tent peak
among scrub pines in Michigan.
I can hear my father stir

and the cot creak. The flap opens.
He goes out and never returns
though the coffee steams on the grill
and the redstart sings in the alders.



American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Reprinted from Passager, 2001, by permission of the author. Copyright © 2001 by E. G. Burrows, whose most recent book is Sailing As Before, Devil's Millhopper Press, 2001. Introduction copyright © 2009 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction's author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.

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  • The ghost of a fleeting memory captured so vividly in a few simple words. That is the essence of true poetry. A really enjoyable read.

  • Bob 42 silver member
    June 25
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    I am reminded

    of my own Fathers passing; I can recall his last words and can imagine his last concerns. Thank you for releasing my boot from the mud........Bob 42


  • musie
    June 24
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    In AWE and Respect

    Your credits are so impressive. I don't mean to sound condescending about that. My understanding of this beautifully written poem, is about memories of your father. The images of the "redstart" and your father never returning make this for a very intriguing read. I feel that this might be over my head re: your expertise in writing. I actually brought back the day's of my father and I on camping trips. Thank you for sharing. musie