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The City's Oldest Known Survivor of the Great War by James Doyle: American Life in Poetry #9

In eighteen lines—one long sentence—James Doyle evokes two settings: an actual parade and a remembered one. By dissolving time and contrasting the scenes, the poet helps us recognize the power of memory and the subtle ways it can move us.
The City's Oldest Known Survivor of the Great War

marches in uniform down the traffic stripe
at the center of the street, counts time
to the unseen web that has rearranged
the air around him, his left hand
stiff as a leather strap along his side,
the other saluting right through the decades
as if they weren't there, as if everyone under ninety
were pervasive fog the morning would dispel
in its own good time, as if the high school band
all flapping thighs and cuffs behind him
were as ghostly as the tumbleweed on every road
dead-ended in the present, all the ancient infantry
shoulder right, through a skein of bone, presenting arms
across the drift, nothing but empty graves now
to round off another century,
the sweet honey of the old cadence, the streets
going by at attention, the banners glistening with dew,
the wives and children blowing kisses.



American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Poem copyright (c) 2004 by James Doyle and reprinted from the New Orleans Review, Vol. 30, No.2, by permission of the author. �His latest book is "Einstein Considers a Sand Dune," Steel Toe Books, 2004. Introduction copyright © 2009 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction's author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.

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  • oldest known survivor poem

    My Dad was shell shocked in WWI and I appreciate this man's memories as some my father shared. May God continue to bless him and his poetry. Joyce VanCour

  • Nice write

    I like the blend of both past and present to make one nice piece, that reads well. It is written in a very good way. Feeling out of place in this with being ninety and above. Everything, will definitely look out of place , too young, too new, a fog in the morning that will dispel to go back to the past to those familiar things and people and time as in environment and the things that were prevalent then.
    Looking beyond the seen to the seen through memory of past, recreating the past -gone into the past throug the seen remembering old friends and service men as if theri bones have been reconjured, only to come back and realize that the past has gone far away into the past.

  • interesting

    i wish more people would add accounts as important as the passages from his life

  • Papagallo
    May 26
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    This was most moving. I had two uncles who served in WWI. Both were nice men, but severely shell-shocked. I still have their photos, now faded, in Army uniform.

  • SadmanJim
    May 26
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    Good God! What an incredible and incredibly moving piece. I thought of my un-met Great Grandfather who served in WWI, as well as my late Father and his Father, Military men both... and farmers too. The emotions swirl in my head with such force now that holding them back is causing me a headache. What talent. And what a tribute!

    Jim Thomas


  • Yy13
    May 26
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    God Bless those Doughboys!!!

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