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American Life in Poetry: Column 210

American Life in Poetry: Column 210

BY TED KOOSER, U.S. POET LAUREATE, 2004-2006

 

My father was the manager of a store in which chairs were strategically placed for those dutiful souls waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for shoppers. Such patience is the most exhausting work there is, or so it seems at the time.

This poem by Joseph O. Legaspi perfectly captures one of those scenes.


At the Bridal Shop

 

The gowns and dresses hang
like fleece in their glaring
whiteness, sheepskin-softness,
the ruffled matrimonial love in which the brides-
in-waiting dance around, expectantly,
hummingbirds to tulips. I was dragged here:
David's Bridal, off the concrete-gray arterial
highways of a naval town. I sink into the flush
bachelors' couch, along with other men sprinkled
throughout the shop, as my friend and her female compatriots parade
taffeta dresses in monstrous shades of pastels--persimmons,
lilacs, periwinkles--the colors of weddings and religious
holidays. Trains drag on the floor, sleeves drape
like limp, pressed sheets of candied fruits,
ribbons fluttering like pale leaves. I watch
families gathered together: the women, like worshippers,
circling around the smiling brides-to-be, as if they were
the anointed ones. The men, in turn, submerge
deeper into couches, into sleep, while the haloed,
veiled women cannot contain their joy,
they flash their winning smiles, and they are beautiful

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  • What a poem!

    So descriptive of the differences of men and women. For the most part, the spotlight is on the women and the men are to be seen and not heard. This is a ritual for girls becoming women. There is no ritual for boys becoming men as so aptly stated by the poet Robert Bly. This is a wonderful poem!


  • Mirthryl
    March 30
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    I was particularly impressed with the way he incorporated color into different aspects of the setting: concrete-gray, glaring whiteness, monstrous shades of pastels. Excellent imagery, "sleeves drape like limp, pressed sheets of candied fruits." Obviously, he has sunk into that couch himself at some time!