The eighteen of you were put here for a reason and that is solely based on your amazing poetry. Through the preliminary rounds I saw some amazing poetry.
This was a letdown for me. I just want you guys to grow, and I can see some talent showing through once you get some extra practice in working together.
That said, you know I love all 18 of you and your poetry, if I didn't I wouldn't be putting anywheres near as much effort and time into this as I am.
Now for the results.
The tribe, unfortunately, who lost and will have two of their poets sent packing is...
Tribe Litterea.
Two of the nine of you will be eliminated this round. The next section will be up shortly. As for Poeta, all nine of you have made it through to the next round.
Judging rubrics:
TRIBE LITTERAE
RYAN~
Piece seems as if it were written by one poet, not nine: 9/10
Used picture prompt & usernames well: 8/10
Creativity, originality: 24/30
Phrasing, wording, etc: 16/20
Imagery: 22/30
Other poetic devices: 12/15
Characterization (followed suggestions): 46/50
Readability, connection to piece/character: 40/50
Overall personal opinion on showcased talent: 21/25
TOTAL: 198/240
BUNNY~
9
9
28
18
28
13
45
45
23
Total 218
TEN~
Piece seems as if it were written by one poet, not nine:7 /10
Used picture prompt & usernames well: 8/10
Creativity, originality: 26/30
Phrasing, wording, etc: 17/20
Imagery: 27/30
Other poetic devices:14 /15
Characterization (followed suggestions): 48/50
Readability, connection to piece/character: 45/50
Overall personal opinion on showcased talent:22 /25
TOTAL 214 /240
LAURA~
Piece seems as if it were written by one poet, not nine: 6/10
Used picture prompt & usernames well: 7/10
Creativity, originality: 24/30
Phrasing, wording, etc: 17/20
Imagery: 22/30
Other poetic devices: 13/15
Characterization (followed suggestions): 40/50
Readability, connection to piece/character: 42/50
Overall personal opinion on showcased talent: 22/25
TOTAL: 193/240
TEN + RYAN = 412
TRIBE POETA
RYAN~
Piece seems as if it were written by one poet, not nine: 9/10
Used picture prompt & usernames well: 9/10
Creativity, originality: 23/30
Phrasing, wording, etc: 13/20
Imagery: 27/30
Other poetic devices: 11/15
Characterization (followed suggestions): 45/50
Readability, connection to piece/character: 45/50
Overall personal opinion on showcased talent: 16/25
TOTAL: 198/240
BUNNY~
8
8
27
17
27
12
43
44
22
Total 208
TEN~
Piece seems as if it were written by one poet, not nine:8 /10
Used picture prompt & usernames well: 9/10
Creativity, originality: 25/30
Phrasing, wording, etc: 18/20
Imagery: 26/30
Other poetic devices:13 /15
Characterization (followed suggestions): 47/50
Readability, connection to piece/character: 42/50
Overall personal opinion on showcased talent:23 /25
TOTAL 211 /240
LAURA~
Piece seems as if it were written by one poet, not nine: 8/10
Used picture prompt & usernames well: 8/10
Creativity, originality: 26/30
Phrasing, wording, etc: 18/20
Imagery: 27/30
Other poetic devices: 12/15
Characterization (followed suggestions): 44/50
Readability, connection to piece/character: 46/50
Overall personal opinion on showcased talent: 23/25
TOTAL: 212/240
TEN + BUNNY = 419
Reward: http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2395443
Elimination / for losing tribe : http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2341079
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Congratulations to Poetica. Enjoy your victory while you can.
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Yikes, do I smell vengence in the future?
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Well that sucks.
But the other team did a good job, so congrats to them.
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I'm sorry we all disappointed you. We were getting to know each other's strengths and weaknesses and forming a harmonious community. Nine poets on four continents in four days isn't as easy as it sounds. Thank you for helping us see the direction we must take in the future. Good luck to all.
Liz
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I think that was just my crabbiness at 3 AM kicking in
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Congrats to Tribe Poeta, though I'll be sad to see two from my team go.
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Both tribes put up one hell of a fight, and I know that Litterea isn't going to go down easily! Well done guys, that was one heck of a challenge!
Thanks to the judges, of course, and Tribe Poeta=&hearts&hearts&hearts! And yeah, where's my beer? If Echidna drank my pitcher already, I'll cry! -
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Ryan hid the beer - but I had a stash - I'll lend you a tissue though
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you can't have it until your done writing your next pieces.
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Man, that sucks
BOOOOO-URNS!
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I'm not surprised, I felt this was coming lol...lets see what monstrous task lies ahead
Congrats to the other team on their success
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Tribe Litterea... i agree with Chandni.
congrats team!!!
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Sorry about Tribe Litterea - You all put up a tough fight
Congrats to POETA!!!! Where's the party?! -
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I am the party
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That's a very poopie party then *grumbles*
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Tribe Poeta
Commiserations to Tribe Litterae, congratulations to fellow members of Tribe Poeta, thanks to the judges, may I have a beer now? -
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I hid it xD
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