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Vocabulary : use of the words that you know

A small piece about what ur LA teachers always taught you: not to use words over and over.
We've all been told in Language Arts class:

"No! No! Do NOT use this word over again! Your readers will get so bored of reading your stuff they will FALL ASLEEP."

...The words that every writer despises to hear.
I, myself, along with most other people, have trouble using terms such as "I, Big, She, He, That, It, and, Said" more often than I should.

All, if not most people around my age, have this problem. It's something we've all faced, and will eventually face. The notorious teacher telling you not to do it.... the mocking readers....

What next?

Feel like you should have a big red sign on your forehead to tell you not to do it? I can relate.

When you're using your words in poetry, or book writing, or any type of LA piece, you know you don't want to use the words that you're used to, because if the piece is long enough, you'll be forced to use them over and over again.

That's when you have several options to help you.

Personally, the Thesaurus is my BEST BUDDY when it comes to writing.

When you find yourself using a word over and over again, you can use this type of book to look up synonyms and antonyms for whatever words you find you keep on using.

Example: Have you ever used the word "Big" a LOT of times in a piece? You'll most likely find words such as


Large
Massive
Vast
Monstrous


.....and even a longer selection than that!
It's not even funny how useful a Thesaurus is when it comes to writing.

There are a couple different types of these books.

There are the complicated, boring type that scare kids out of using them, and there are the classroom kinds that most people would prefer:

They are in simple ABC order and list all of the words that relate to the word that you're having trouble with.


And what if you're a person that's like.... a MINIATURE Stephen King?
You LOVE detail and all of its candied effects that cast a spell on your writing...

If you can't get your hands on a Thesaurus, then the every-day, handy-dandy dictionary is also grand for the job!

Once, before I had heard of the wonders of the magicalicious Thesaurus, I got out the family dictionary and started to try to read it.

I felt like plucking my eyes out of their sockets after a while, though. (Honestly, though, I would prefer not to do that.) So I flipped to random pages and scanned them for the bigget words I could find.
If the word sounded like something I would use in one of my stories or poems, I would write it down, along with its defenition, and saw what I could do with it.

It's worked before, even though it's boring down to the point where you're bored to tears.

But even though you may be bored: it works. trust me.

Here's hoping I gave you (Er... Or should I say anyone bored enough to read this passage?) ... a sense of what to do if you're stuck.

Happy Writing!


------------------> For thsoe that have told me over again that you are able to use the same words in repetition for effect/emphasis, i know this, but realize that i also said that if you were trying to write a STORY, these tips can come in handy.

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  • Yvette Champ gold member
    March 11, 2008
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  • maralisa silver member
    February 8, 2008
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    thank you i have just started to use the thesauruses
    i love to learn new words and there meanings


  • GossamerAlice
    January 28, 2008
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    Thanks for this! I love thesauruses... but never thought of the dictionary. Thanks to my father, I lack common sense. -_- It's a great idea though, I think I'll try it! ^-^


  • Peachy
    January 20, 2008
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    I read a dictionary every day so I am constantly learning new words. I am very conscious of the words I use and how many times I use them, I think it might be an obsession of mine.

  • annie
    December 31, 2007
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    teachers have much to learn

    Here is hope for poets lost, although reading good poets words can add more knowledge as long as you keep that dictionary handy. I learn from others how to find myself. I thank you for teaching, Annie


  • dustookie2
    December 29, 2007
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    Amazing what people do who use the pen and words but like everything you have to put time and effort into developing your craft and where else do you go but into a dictionary and thesaurus. I found reading these books seeking for words can help inspire even break the dreaded block...


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    December 19, 2007
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    You are so right!!!!!!!! Using the thesaurus improves you writing, keep down redundancy and makes your piece less boring!!!! Thank you for this information.. It is very helpful!!!!!!!!!!!


  • ZeInkslinger
    December 19, 2007
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    i carry a thesaurus/dictionary with my journal and pen. i have a thing for couplet form of rhyming in my long poems, so when I have a word but it doesnt rhyme, i can usually find a word that rhymes with the previous line but still has the same meaning of the word that I originally had there.
    I find them quite nessecery(mispelled?).

    p.s.
    u mispelled *Stephen King


  • Frodofan silver member
    December 19, 2007
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    I think using a thesarus to make your writing more descriptive is definite cheating. Then it's not you with the knack for great description, it ends up being the thesarus.

    You should use words you know. I find the only good use of a thesarus is to find the word that you know but just can't think of when it's on the tip of your tongue, or to study words and their relatives.

    Turning to the thesarus when you want something better is a writing crutch.


  • pine-needles
    December 19, 2007
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    the thesaurus can be a very useful tool, definitely, to expand the range of words you use in writing and avoid repeating yourself endlessly in a piece. great that you are pointing out this valuable resource to those who have not discovered it yet, and also suggesting a very interesting, inventive source of inspiration.

    i'd just like to add a little caveat to the people who are reading this that the thesaurus is great for reminding you of words you already know that could possibly work as alternatives, but its probably a good idea to make sure you know the word and when/how to use it before you stick it into your paper or poem. words have subtle shades of meaning and often can be used in many different contexts. therefore not all the words suggested serve your specific purpose. in other words, don't just pick the fanciest word in the list that you've never seen before. simplicity is under appreciated.

    anyways, thanks for sharing your knowledge and inspiration with us!

  • LlamaLord
    December 19, 2007
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    mhmmm

    yeah, I remember those middle school days... I agree big time... I think I might go over my current poems to look for that. Something i've done to improve my vocab is to go to dictionary.com and look at their word of the day. They usually give good words that I don't know, and you can get it emailed to you as well.

    Although it should be noted that repetition (and parallelism) can be very effective. (as said by judyjudyjudy)

    Thanks for writing this column. =]


  • Eon Blue
    December 18, 2007
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    You speak the truth. *nod*
    Thank you for sharing!

    I advise you to read this legendary thread: http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=2083009
    It proves to be quite amusing.

  • Judith Chandler
    December 18, 2007
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    What you say is very true. But in certain poems, the repetition of certain words can be very effective.

    Just thought I would point that out.

    JJJ


  • think of me x
    December 18, 2007
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    Heh, that's true
    I really hated when teachers said that, but now it's got me to the point where I despise having words repeated, especially descriptive words. And sometimes it's infuriating to the point where you wanna chuck the pen across the room and swear off writing (only to grab another one and start 10 minutes later).

    I've personally become a fan of the thesaurus AP installed in the sidebar. And dictionary.com. Reading work from people older than you helps sometimes too, they've been exposed to more and you pick up some vocab.


  • Matt Holck
    December 18, 2007
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    I often try to use words that I'm unsure of the definition
    so I look them up
    search [define word]

    thank you for writing this artical


  • Star Shine
    December 18, 2007
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    Thanks for this informative piece. I guess rules are suspended once your poetic or literary genius is acclaimed, because some of the creepiest horror tales or some of the most profound works have repetition. Steven King is known for some of his descriptive terms of sounds and people are always "scrabbling for purchase" when falling off of something in his writes, and I don't get bored. But you are correct and this info is good to have.


  • Max Ritvo
    December 18, 2007
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    Shouldn't word choice be subordinate to cadence and the tone of the poem? Whitman has some poetry oozing with repetitive words, Poe is known to have words or phrases evoked as a mantra or consciously inflicted upon the reader over and over as a scourge or salve- and let's not forget Hemmingway. Sancho doesn't "mumble" or "sigh" - he "says" Over and over again he "says" and "thinks"- and it's one of the most beautiful things in English.


  • StarDancerPoet
    December 17, 2007
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    over usage of word

    Sometimes you can over used words more for humor effect like Steve Crane's poem War is Kind, but only if you is it properly.


  • branislawa
    December 17, 2007
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    Hey, thanks! I know I get stuck sometimes...

    P.S. "magicalicious" is an interesting word combination. I like it.


  • Lost In Dreaming
    December 17, 2007
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    this is really good--during the summer when i get bored or depressed i also will just flip through the dictionary and find words i like and write them down--my favorite is tintinabulation(alteast i htink thats how you spell it i cant remember--but ive only seen it used once in one of edgar allan poe's poems)


  • DancingQueenAngi
    December 17, 2007
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    I also agree with Cricketjeff and Bitter Irony.

    "'No! No! Do NOT use this word over again! You're readers will..." wrong use of you're.

    Angi


  • Bitter Irony
    December 17, 2007
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    Adding to what Cricketjeff says...the difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug. This is the major difference between LA class and real world poetry: in LA, you can use big words to impress people: in poetry, you must use YOUR words to impress people. Your words, your ideas: you thought of these ideas in certain words, right? So why not use those words to express them?


  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 17, 2007
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    A warning

    Be very very careful, the thesaurus does not list exact synonyms, as many poems are ruined by using words that you think you understand, only to find you have compared a beautiful lady to a Victorian floor mop.
    Always try to expand your vocabulary, but get a good pronouncing dictionary as well as a thesaurus. Steer well clear of words marked as archaisms and really know how everything you write should sound.
    If you want a good set of online reference tools there are excellent free dictionaries, thesauruses and rhyming dictionaries in many places on the web.


    • LarryATilander
      December 17, 2007
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      I wish I could find

      a woman who compared to a Victorian floor mop, or at least use one.

    • Demmy-Defect
      December 17, 2007
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      I thank you for the tip... but i actually do use an online dictionary to look up the supposed synonyms to make sure of what i write.
      mato---yes, i've done that before... the was only a suggestion to those getting bored of the same things over and over again

      • cricketjeff gold member
        December 17, 2007
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        I should have included in my reply that I totally agree with you, merely wanted to add the warning that it's no good replacing one error with another!


  • mato
    December 17, 2007
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    Don't forget to mention that..

    You CAN repeat words for impact.


  • TheShadowsOfMe
    December 17, 2007
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    NICE!


  • Psycho Jess
    December 17, 2007
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    Nice one!! The Thesaurus is definatly a very under appriciated thing! Great advice, I just hope lots of people read it and listen to your wise words!
    Jess x


  • LarryATilander
    December 17, 2007
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    The bottom line is

    if you don't read you can't write.


  • frownsnfreckles
    December 17, 2007
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    a great piece of advice! useful just to increase your vocabulary which then stretches your imagination and enriches the power of your emotional expression.


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    December 17, 2007
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    Bravo!

    Personally, I find the Thesaurus quite useful... I've always got http://www.thesaurus.reference.com running in the background, if I'm stuck on that perfect word for my poem. This is great, and I think that more people should read it! Well done!

    Little clappy guy x3

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