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Tips For Writing Poetry

Tips For Writing Poetry
Written By John Hewitt
10/15/95

(These are  ( John Hewitts ) personal guidelines. He doesn't guarantee they will work for everybody, and even he will break the rules whenever he feels like it. There are even some contradictions. Take what you like and forget the rest.)

 


1. A poem with Love in the title (Or Destiny, Hate, or other HUGE themes) already has two strikes against it. (And I like Love poems.)


2. The bigger your point, the more important the details are.


3. Say what you want to say, let the reader decide what it means.


4. Don't explain EVERYTHING.


5. Poems that focus on form (Sonnet, Villanelle, etc.) are rarely my favorites, but most of my favorite poets learned how to write in forms before they discarded them. Writing in form is a challenge. It makes you think.


6. People will remember an image long after they've forgotten why it was there.


7. If you write a bad poem, at least you wrote.


8. Develop your voice. Get comfortable with how YOU write.


9. Don't be afraid to write from a different point of view. Write a poem that says exactly the opposite of what you believe, and do it without irony.


10. When you can't write, lie on the floor a while. (Thank you Jon Anderson)


11. Untitled poems are lazy. They're like unnamed children. Obviously their parent doesn't care about them.


12. Write in different places. Keep a notebook. Write in a park or on a street-corner or in an alley. You don't HAVE to write about the place, but it will influence you whether you do or not.


13: Listen to talk radio while you write. Listen to the people who call. Great characters and voices emerge that way.


14. If you don't like a poem or poet, figure out exactly why. Chances are, it reflects something you don't like about your own poetry.


15. When nothing is coming, start writing very fast-- any word, phrase or sentence that comes to mind. Do that for about a minute, then go back to your poem. (I call this flushing.) Whether to use anything you flushed is up to you. You can, but that's not the purpose.


16. The more you read, the more you learn. The more you write, the more you develop.


17. Make a list of poems you can remember specific lines from. Go back and read those poems. Figure out why they stuck with you.


18. There are many excuses not to write. Try using writing as an excuse not to do other things.

Part II

Written By John Hewitt
1/17/96

(My first Poetry Tips Article has been so well received that it has spawned this sequel. Again, any contradictions or inconsistencies are the result of the poetry, not this writer. Take the advice you like, and don't worry about the rest.)

 

1. Keep a dream journal. Dreams are your mind at it's most creative so listen to it. Don't feel you have to write a poem ABOUT your dreams. If you want to, fine, but the main goal is to see what thoughts the dreams lead you to.


2. Subscribe to poetry journals. Give back to the poetry community by reading (and paying for) the works of others. If you don't, what right have you to expect others to do it for you?


3. When nothing is coming for you, try analyzing someone else' s poems. (Or even one of yours) Figure out what works, what doesn't work, and why. Think about what you would have done differently.


4. Use humor, irony, and melodrama, just don't abuse them.


5. Write the worst poem you can possibly write. Use cliche's, pretentious words, and beat your reader over the head with your point. Felt good, didn't it? Now get back to work. The point is, don't be afraid to write a bad poem. If it takes a hundred bad poems before you can produce a poem you like, fine, get that hundred out of the way.


6. Dirty limericks can be fun too.


7. That one perfect line in a thirty line poem may be what makes it all worthwhile, or it may be what makes the rest of the poem bad. Keep an eye on it.


8. Every great poet has written a bad poem, probably dozens or hundreds, possibly thousands. They kept writing though, and so should you.


9. Every line of a poem should be important to the poem, and interesting to read. A poem with only 3 great lines should be 3 lines long.


10. Poems should progress. There should be a reason why the first stanza comes before the second, the second before the third, and so on.


11. Listen to criticism, and try to learn from it, but don't live or die by it. When I was in college, I would always take my best reviewed poem from the previous class and submit it for review in the next. Invariably, the next professor hated the poem, and could provide good reasons why it failed.


12. When you write a good poem, one you really like, immediately write another. Maybe that one poem was your peak for the night or maybe you're on a roll. There's only one way to find out.


13. Follow your fear. Don't back away from subjects that make you uncomfortable, and don't try to keep your personal demons off the page. Even if you never publish the poems they produce, you have to push yourself and write as honestly as possible.


14. Submit your poems. Sooner or later you have to send your babies out into the world to find their way. Emily Dickinson was a fluke, most people who don't publish while they're alive will never be seen or heard of -- no matter how good their poems.


I did not write this.

Full credit goes to :

 http://www.onr.com/user/gambrill/tips.htm

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  • abuyi
    November 27, 2008
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    very good tips.. i follow most of them


  • TheRealDeal
    October 21, 2007
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    This certainly gives one a lot to think about. As a new member to the community here, I just may have to give a few of these tips a whirl and see what they produce.
    JLG


  • Perception
    October 21, 2007
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    Thanks for the tips, I shall keep these in mind...




  • ixtli
    October 21, 2007
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    I found this very helpful! Thanks for writing it!

  • LlamaLord
    October 21, 2007
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    Great

    Thanks a lot! You've made some great points and I'll put them to good use!


  • NoUseForAName
    October 21, 2007
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    I particularly like #5 of the second part. I have learned for more about writing from reading bad poetry than I have from from reading good poetry. I think it's important to be comfortable enough with your writing that you know, sometimes, you suck.

    Even the greats sucked. I think people forget that even Byron wrote crappy poems. (And quite a few of them were published!)

    The difference between then and now though, is no-one read those crappy poems. Now we have sites like this one where everyone posts crappy poetry and calls it a masterpiece.

    Hmmm..


  • abuyi
    October 21, 2007
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    thanks for making such a column.. it sure helps a lot


  • Dienush
    October 21, 2007
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    Love this. It really makes me want to write, and they're good tips. Thanks for sharing.


  • Namita
    October 21, 2007
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    Excellent.

    I love the flushies idea and the dream journal too. Thank you so much.

    ~Candy


  • Therisark
    October 21, 2007
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    Thank you...

    ...for providing these tips.

    Helped me improve.

  • ea silver member
    October 21, 2007
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    Is this Mr. Hewitt, the North Irish poet? Maybe we can rename the "Quickies" as "Flushies" because I agree. Also, good advice on the bad poem writing there.

    Thanks for bringing this article to light. *clapping*

    P.S. Too bad there is an apostrophe in 1. of Part II "Dreams are your mind at *its* most creative." 5. "cliches" doesn't need the apostrophe either because it's simply plural. Cliches is not possessing anything here. I doubt Hewitt put it there but we definitely need a column about it.


    • Kari gold member
      October 21, 2007
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      Yes, it is his I don't know if you see it or not but the link for where it came from is down at the bottom. Amazing enough this was done in the year 1995 ! I will do more research later and see what I can find out. Thank you for your comment!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 20, 2007
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    I think Number 4 in the Part I...

    4. Don't explain EVERYTHING

    should be in big bold letters and splashed numerous times throughout both Part I and Part II as a constant reminder.

    I cringe inside everytime I glance at a comment someone has left and I read that they think the author should explain themselves in their author notes. I personally have never had that happen to me, but if I did, I think I would consider it quite rude. Poetry is suppose to inspire you, make you think, make you dream, make you feel, lift you up and draw into other planes and avenues within the mind. If you need someone to explain it... well... I better not elaborate any further. Just my humble opinion. This is a great column Hun! Very useful to look back upon.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • vici377
    October 20, 2007
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    yeah

    pretty good..i like some of your tips.. i think many people get caught up in the perfection of poetry and i don't think it has to be perfect..just my opinion..most of mine is pretty raw and just emotional..so the grammar isnt always perfect and the flow isn't and the meter isn't but what the hell it is an expression..and it is MINE...


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    Great Ideas

    Many I hope to use and remember

  • theXmadXhatter
    October 20, 2007
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    lots of great ideas. Some of them give me the hope to never give up on my writing.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    Pertinent and punchy poetic tips for reasons to find a quill or a pen and dip into ink and pen again and again Neat and right up my street


  • LadyUnique silver member
    October 20, 2007
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    i dug it too!

    there are a lot of great ideas in here. i'm bookmarking this puppy


  • catz Moderators member
    October 20, 2007
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    Thanks for a very helpful column, Kari... and thanks to John Hewitt for the original

    Some I recognize and even do, some are certainly food for thought, enlightenment and inspiration.

    Love and
    Granna


  • MuffinTree
    October 20, 2007
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    This is useful! Thanks Windsong!


  • IrishYndina
    October 20, 2007
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    Some great tips here...thanks for sharing this with us!


  • HugsForEveryone
    October 20, 2007
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    omg wow! I am so going to write another poem right now! lol, this was very inspirational because I haven't noticed, but I have been writing about how I miss my daddy, but now I am going to write about how he probably feels. I am so bookmarking this! Thanks for sharing!
    ~Pandy~


    • Kari gold member
      October 20, 2007
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      Aw, well I am glad it helped you and good luck !!


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    very good tips here...Some I've tried, others I will look to try in the future. Thanks for bringing this to our attention.
    Rory


    • Kari gold member
      October 20, 2007
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      You're welcome and thank you for your comment. I appreciate it!


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    October 20, 2007
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    This is great..Thank you so much for offering this information..Some I have heard before and some was new..Very thoughtful of you... I'm going to bookmark it..
    Soulful Woman


    • Kari gold member
      October 20, 2007
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      I am really glad that you liked it!

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