you see it's pretty simple...i feel you...just like that...i drink your words like some divine nectar and hold on to your talk as if it was my only way of salvation...it's so simple i cant understand the "normal" "mature" way of thinking...i cant understand how anyone can block their feelings, that is of course if these feelings are there...
you're so much wiser than i am...you have a goal and you follow it...now i wouldnt even dream that you might feel anything similar towards me as i might towards you...and i probably just need closure...or maybe i'm torturing myself in order to write more...or maybe you're not even in the same contexte...
and i feel i'm repeating myself...and pushing you too hard...i dont want to fuck up...i cant bare the thought of losing you...but you must understand that every time you're close to me all i want is to hold you...all i want is to kiss you...and spend my life trying to make you happy...
i've always been a dreamer...always lived outside reality...maybe you should tell me what i need to hear but dont wanna hear...maybe you should help me get back on the ground...maybe i should stop living in the clouds...
you see what pains me most is that my words are not working...it's like you're somehow impervious to the flow...and well,i am addicted to using the flow...it's the only way of communication i have...you know i can't talk...well at least not much when you're around...
but then you tell me you're breathless every time you read "me" but that's not enough for me anymore...
you see i want to hear your heart beating to the rythme of my rhymes,i want to feel feel the shivers going all the way from your hands to your spine every time you find yourself in my words...
it's simple really...i want it all...
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this is beautiful... and I somehow needed it...
I can't write lately and you spoke for me...
ok ... no more words, amazing
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i'm afraid of u from now on........................
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reading the words of a dreamer make me feel your a great writer serge the only word i can say is WOW!!!
i'm torturing myself in order to write more...or maybe you're not even in the same contexte...
and i feel i'm repeating myself...and pushing you too hard...i dont want to fuck up...i cant bare the thought of losing you...but you must understand that every time you're close to me all i want is to hold you...all i want is to kiss you...and spend my life trying to make you happy...
i've always been a dreamer...always lived outside reality...maybe you should tell me what i need to hear but dont wanna hear...maybe you should help me get back on the ground...maybe i should stop living in the clouds...
amazing !! -
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thank you
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um.. well.. everytime i say i'm speechless after reading one of ur writes.. i end up writing a long comment which does not reflect the fact that i am speechless.. but this time i am blabing that means that im really speechless.. cz u know.. i have NEVER ever seen something so close to the way i feel or think.. u read my mind.. my heart and my soul.. and i understand every single word.. this is just fan-fuckin-tastic ...
"you see it's pretty simple...i feel you...just like that...
i've always been a dreamer...always lived outside reality...maybe you should tell me what i need to hear but dont wanna hear...maybe you should help me get back on the ground...maybe i should stop living in the clouds...
,i want to feel feel the shivers going all the wat from your hands to your spine every time you find yourself in my words...
it's simple really...i want it all... "
it's amazin.. the way you feel.. the way u express how u feel.. n im cryin..
GREAT..
u were right.. u had to say it.. u had to write it.. cz.. i had to read it..
loooove!
Mwah
*sorry for the column.. i get carried away u know me..*
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