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Challenge Yourself......Vets vs Rookies....Round 3

 





Welcome back ladies and gents

for Round Three of

Vets vs Rookies!

 










In the last round you all worked with forms and did an amazing job

I might add, though we still had to bid farewell to two poets.

The two poets we waved good bye to were Sonja and

onyxsoul, HOWEVER, since the posting of the

eliminations I was approached by a poet and

one of the two immunity passes has been

brought out. I am happy to say that

here in round three onyxsoul

will once again be

joining us!

 

 

 

 

In round one you had to deal with mythological creatures

and in round two you had the lovely challenge of

playing with forms which brings us here to

round three. In round three you will

tackle one of my favorite types

of challenges to create

and offer up.

 


 

Now before I get to what your challenge will be this time

let me first bring your attention to the fact that this

round we will not be saying farewell to just two

poets but instead, at the end of this round

we will be bidding farewell to THREE

poets. That's right the three poets

with the lowest scores at the

end of this round will be

leaving us this time

around.

 

 


 

For this round I expect you ALL to think outside

your box. That will be the ONLY way to

make it through this round.

 


 

Your challenge this week will be based off of two things. First

I will give you each a single word. From this word your

write is to be based/inspired/springboard from.

 

 

You may NOT mention the word anywhere in your write

or in any form, be it past, present or future.


 

Below you will find your name with your assigned

word beside it. There will be no exchanging

or swapping of words. What you get is

what you got and that is FINAL!

 

 

Muddy King ~ origami

 

leander ~ perception

 

JM Kenyon ~ estranged

 

JustRob ~ adaptation

 

luckynsincere ~ solitude

 

onyxsoul ~ sinister

 

Poetryality ~ brotherhood

 

wbiro ~ classified

 

kaibab ~ sulfate

 

speakingup4kids ~ evolution

 

Blazing White Wolf ~ flamboyant

 

Cherokee ~ monogamy

 

9 Crimes ~ compassion

 

Forever Ryan ~ obstruction

 

Desire ~ pharmaceutical

 

B Chandler ~ necessity

 

penman ~ metallic

 

Ktulu Blackwolfe ~ desolation

 

lavender shadows ~ procrastination

 

 

 

 




There you all have your assigned word, however that is but

one part to this round. Below you will find a list of fifty

phrases I have put together. From that list you are

to use a minimum of twenty-five (25) of those

phrases in your write this round. However,

you may use more if you so choose to.

 


The phrases CANNOT be altered in any way.

Any phrases that are altered in any way will

cost you 2points per altered phrase

deducted from your score for

this round.

 



~ Phrases ~



 

bucking bronco

masturbating memories

cradled creativity

captivated chaos

curtain cries

sadistic salutes

public perception

patchwork playground

natural navigations

fruitful fascination

wicked whining

shocks surged

dictating discharges

collared collective

fickle foundations

hearty habits

painfully prancing

blemished beauty

amethyst apparition

phenomenal phantasm

bellowing barricades

tactical tilling

carnal calamities

waning whirlwinds

chaffed chastity

creamed creations

prehistoric procreation

wafting winds

mirrored mirage

twisted twins

leather lashings

fiddling fingers

textile thoughts

crescent craters

ashen alleys

absolute annihilation

cerebral containment

luscious laughter

robotic reality

fiercely feigning

railroaded ramblings

televised tribulations

crayola canyons

swatting swarms

opinionated opposition

sunny sided semantics

dreams drain

tremors trip

zealous zephyr

callous captions

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your MUST list your assigned word and

ALL the phrases that you chose to

use throughout your write in the

author's comment. If this all

this informations is not

there at the time of

judging I will

deduct 10

points.

 


 

Backgrounds and fonts MUST be readable!

 

 

You are limited to NO more than 60 lines!

 

 

 

Remember poetic devices are your friend.....

USE THEM!

 


Thinking out side your box is what you MUST do to

keep from being in the bottom three (3). Keep in

mind this round it is NOT the bottom two (2)

poets leaving us but instead the bottom

THREE (3) that will be leaving us.

 

 



 

All Entries MUST be have a link

posted in the comment area

below no later than

Friday, MARCH 16th

@ 8PM EST.

 


 

GOOD LUCK!!!!!!






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  • luckynsincere gold member
    March 25, 2007
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    thanks for the extention

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2778378

  • B Chandler
    March 21, 2007
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  • Susan E. Pennycuff gold member
    March 20, 2007
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  • wbiro gold member
    March 17, 2007
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    thanks for the extension, busy week... now you know that my natural inclination is to exist outside of boxes, so it follows that logically for me to be outside my box would be to be inside my box, being normally outside my box, but there is a problem- I cannot find my box, so I am floating here in space... where I am at this very moment creating a piece definitely not like my previous entries, if that fits the bill... the link should arrive momentarily... here-- ( http://allpoetry.com/poem/2749108 )

    • Celticmoon gold member
      March 17, 2007
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      Ya know I am begining to realize with this group in this challenge I should no longer say "outside the box" but inside force everyone inside the box
  • marrow
    March 16, 2007
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  • JM Kenyon silver member
    March 16, 2007
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    Here it is:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2744594

    I meant to post this yesterday so I'd have time to get some feedback in comments and make changes if I found them appropriate, but we had a little car accident instead. Nobody got hurt except some trees and our car. We only have stiff muscles and shaking hands!

    Good luck all, this one was tricky!

    s and best wishes... ~Genie~

  • poetryality silver member
    March 16, 2007
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    WHEW!

    Thank the Heavens! I am in! My PC is still not fixed, my nephew had car trouble and his car is down. Hubby's PC works just fine. Here goes:

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2744548

    The best to EVERYONE!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee

  • lavender shadows
    March 16, 2007
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    Delayed in Dictating Discharges
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2744128

  • Ryno silver member
    March 15, 2007
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  • leander gold member
    March 15, 2007
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  • penman gold member
    March 14, 2007
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  • redonyx
    March 14, 2007
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    okay, I fixed the AC in my poem.

  • poetryality silver member
    March 13, 2007
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    MY PC is...*&^$%#$%@#

    I am experiencing a problem with my computer. I have a wireless adapter which just stopped working. I have been waiting since Sunday for my nephew to come see if he can fix the problem... to no avail. I am here on my husband's PC (sneaking). He doesn't know that I know his password. He's so preditible that I figured it out. I must be off in a few as not to be caught red handed. I do hope to have my entry in by the deadline on Friday. If I see that I can't I bid you all the best of luck with the Rounds. Kudos to whomever sucessfully comes out on top.


    Love YOU ALL! Gotta run!


    Renee

  • MuddyKing silver member
    March 13, 2007
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  • leander gold member
    March 13, 2007
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    It's not fair

    I can't mention the word 'perception' in the poem, but there's one 'public perception' in the word bank
    You just made it more difficult for me
    lol

  • Blazing White Wolf
    March 13, 2007
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  • redonyx
    March 12, 2007
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    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2716438
    all I have to do is write the AC, and I'll do that after school. I just forgot that I hadn't posted this. Sorry. ^^; I'll post an update when I do the AC.

  • Desire gold member
    March 12, 2007
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    Holy Momma pajama-

    Best wishes to ALL

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2729334

    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Just Rob gold member
    March 12, 2007
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    Whew!

    Well, I did it. Now I have a box.lol. link-

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2728974

  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    March 11, 2007
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    heres my entry.....

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/2726944

    goes back inside my little box.......

  • Just Rob gold member
    March 10, 2007
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    Question?

    Would the use of capital letters be considered alteration of the phrases?

  • luckynsincere gold member
    March 9, 2007
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    read it... I will have my entry in on time... but please remember that I will not be back until the 20th... so please do not eliminate me... I will be back!

    Mel

  • leander gold member
    March 9, 2007
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    in contradiction of yesterday

    yaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

    I got perception

  • poetryality silver member
    March 9, 2007
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    Friday is March 16th! Okiedokie!


  • Elvis
    March 8, 2007
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    I read it...

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    March 8, 2007
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    Oh man... I suddenly feel like I've got too much in my box with me! I'll be back with a link after I throw all this stuff out, get out of my box, go shopping for some new threads and play dress up with it all (no promises that I won't show up just plain naked!)

    This ought to keep my mind busy!!!

    s ~Genie~

    s ~Genie~

    • Celticmoon gold member
      March 8, 2007
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      If you show up naked you better make certain you have a warning label stuck to you as well

      We don't want anyone being taken by surprise

      • JM Kenyon silver member
        March 8, 2007
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        I swear I'll walk backwards and wear surgeon general's label on my butt saying: Warning: Do not look directly at the moon. The moon may cause sudden, psycological trauma that may lead to total and complete blindness. If you are accidentally caught unaware by the moon, see a physician as soon as possible as the other side of the moon may cause heart failure in some people."

        Oh dear... I think I need a nap!

        • Celticmoon gold member
          March 8, 2007
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          Hey now Genie,

          Being as there is 'Moon' in my name I'm not sure to take offense or take that as a compliment


          I think I prefer a compliment but then I'm no so sure

          • JM Kenyon silver member
            March 8, 2007
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            that never even crossed my mind <--- foot in mouth, stepping viciously on my tongue (with stiletto heels)

            I'm now cursing every set of butt cheeks I ever saw plastered to a car window!

  • kaibab silver member
    March 8, 2007
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  • marrow
    March 8, 2007
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    oh my.
    congrats lindsay! i'll definitely need to try and muster up something for this round.

    j

    • Celticmoon gold member
      March 8, 2007
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      I know you will Justin.
      And I am sure it'll be grand
      • marrow
        March 8, 2007
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        I'm thinking of maybe going for a form, and try and work with something that will highlight my piece. That may be difficult to do with phrases and all, but I will see if I may work that-- it'd be outside my box! Haha.

        • Celticmoon gold member
          March 8, 2007
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          Yes that would be outside your box

          Looking forward to it

          • Just Rob gold member
            March 9, 2007
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            I know, I know,

            I'll shape the poem like a nice big refrigerator
            box where I would fit nicely...

  • MuddyKing silver member
    March 8, 2007
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    someday I want to get inside the box, is an outside thinker...best wishes to all

    • Just Rob gold member
      March 9, 2007
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      Lemme

      know if you see a box anywhere. Inside would be out for me too; perhaps another Zen masterbation poem...

      • Celticmoon gold member
        March 9, 2007
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        Alright Rob, since inside is outside for you I'll allow you to play within the box this round

    • Celticmoon gold member
      March 8, 2007
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      Richard you are not allowed inside the box

      You work better on the outside with the rest of us sane people

      • MuddyKing silver member
        March 8, 2007
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        btw, who is this mystery judge...she looks like a blow-up doll....oh my I've just blown it fo' sho'...lmao

        • Celticmoon gold member
          March 8, 2007
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          She's a long time friend of mine and a memeber here, however since she can't cloak I have her using backup account of mine. I don't want her known til the end of the challenge.

          As for the blow up doll pic....LMAO

          I had to tossed a pic up for a face just for laughs and went with one that just seemed so fake and bizzare

          • MuddyKing silver member
            March 8, 2007
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            I had a dream about that one, or was it a nightmare...nuff said...lmao...bizzare's the word

      • MuddyKing silver member
        March 8, 2007
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        wonders if folding the Sunday paper counts as origami, can make a mean capn' hat...and you can't get that at Walmart

        • Celticmoon gold member
          March 8, 2007
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          LMAO....

          I don't believe I've ever seen a paper pirate hate at Walmart

          And no folding the Sunday paper doesn't qualify as origami


          but definately a nice try

  • redonyx
    March 8, 2007
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    You spelled Friday wrong.
    But... woot!

  • B Chandler
    March 8, 2007
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    ok okay with three other contests running, my entry might be a bit late but in nonetheless

  • leander gold member
    March 8, 2007
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    I got the word perception ? Perception?

    There are like a billion things to think about that word I love those phrases though

    Just one little question: phrases can't be altered: if I descide to use e.g. 35, and 10 of them are altered, 25 not... would that still deduct me 20 (10 times 2) points?

    Yayness for Bel

    • Celticmoon gold member
      March 8, 2007
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      LEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      -runs and tackles lee cause she missed him sooooooooooooo much-

      I missed you

      Don't even leave me again



      And yes you still be deducted 20 pts (10 times 2)

      • leander gold member
        March 8, 2007
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        and if I used 35 but only but 25 - the not altered ones in author's note?

        • Celticmoon gold member
          March 8, 2007
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          MUST use at least 25!

          Using any more is your choice but regardless if using more than the required amount the rules of not altering the phrases still applies to whatever number of phrases you decide to use in addition to the required 25

        • Celticmoon gold member
          March 8, 2007
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          I'll still know

          I count them as I read through

          • leander gold member
            March 8, 2007
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            and what if I used e.g. 35 instead of 25 - only put the 25 not altered ones in author's page and then claim that I didn't know that the 10 altered ones were originally phrases you put in there and that it's pure coincidence...

            And then sue you with 6 or 7 lawyers if you don't believe me?

            • Celticmoon gold member
              March 8, 2007
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              I'll see you in court and then beat you like a red headed step child

              • redonyx
                March 8, 2007
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                I actually AM a red headed step child. Does that mean I'll get beaten lots? lol

                • Celticmoon gold member
                  March 8, 2007
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                  Wasn't planning on beating you too but damn if ya want me too i'm sure I can make up a reason

              • leander gold member
                March 8, 2007
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                dang

                and what if I said I'd ban you

                transforms into mod-power

  • Blazing White Wolf
    March 8, 2007
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    understood and damn 25 phrases huh? out of the box okies hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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