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Born in the
Sky
~Starshine~
gently,
Come nigh,
lips awakenin,
lovely love beckoning,
Dainty Dew Drops Sunrise,
feelings; soft fingers touching,
white petals whisper tickling sighs,
breath sweet breath on my neck,
swirling in a gaseous cloud,
I love you enveloping air,
you are with me,
and I am there,
~Always~
You,
slide into,
my Sweet Love,
down lazy blue moonbeams,
into the arms of my waiting forever,
honey ~ dew moon, dripping drop driplets.
nights dreams; Dawn dew Daisy lit sunshine,
Musk's sweet~soft scented aroma swirls,
Glistening; Knotted spoon entwine,
my crazy dazed Daisy ablaze,
tongue swirl sift~seeking,
crawling slip~sipping,
gleaming viscous,
lips licking,
flicking,
clutched,
solemnly tight,
Star shine trembling,
shimmer; euphoric symphony,
bright white stars collide flowering,
breathtaking beauty;to temporal subside
feel my arms wrap around you soft meld,
carry on your dear longing thoughts,
Wet burning in flowery desire,
bodies entwine into knots,
spooned into once,
dreamt dream,
feel me,
glide
goodnight and now you may feel my dreams,
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joewell I spent all night playing with pictures, this is me latest work in progress, maybe I will have a continuously changing poem here, hmmm good idea we'll see :P :)
so this picture has all the words in it I need to say hope it says what I can'treally put into words
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So perfectly serene...the images portrayed are wonderful, the words so masterfully blended...You earned this applause 100%!!
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fabulous work...i particularly like dainty dew drops sunrise and lazy blue moonbeams..your style and use of metaphor shows great talent...and i'm very glad i came to read this....very very well done!!...hugs...leanne xxx
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sensual
This is so heavenly written ,, I am in awe again.. you have a gift.. A wonderful gift.. Thank you for sharing this with me.. I feel as though it is I that is in the piece.. That i can place my self here.. What sensual pleasure.. Joe.. Thank you.....
Carin~~ -
Knotted spoon entwine
Dreaming with honey ~ dew moon
And Dawn dew sunshine
Another haiku for you
...this little work in progress keeps getting more beautiful by the minute 
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if only for a day to be swept away in this gallant dream
of milkyways and lovely skies
oh what a mystical heart you own
other than repomen79, I have met a man with such a huge heart
and romantic dream of love
pen on pal
for you have a blessed gift to share with us
Tamara -
more like how many words is a picture worth... pictures say what no words could dream of uttering. i think that's why i want tobe a photographer. i love your pictures... lol. i admit those are the once i read first, the ones' with pictures.
rock on joe
kris -
Joe you are such a romantic guy. This is truely beautiful in word and in the way you display it.
You,
slide into,
my Sweet Love,
down lazy blue moonbeams,
into the arms of my waiting forever,
daydream dew drop Daisy lit, nights dreams...
lol I tried to copy my favorite words but they flew all over the page. Well you get the picture lovely words my friend.
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Well. I'm taken somewhere. Eclipsed and back. This is without a doubt a breath-taking write. Not sure if it was a psycho-drama since you well produced the background to handshake the style,eetc. But
Even on its own. It's a very vibrant and unique read!!!
Impressive. Thank you!!!! Warmly, CookieZeal/D
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Intoxicating...both your words and the background. The title is awesome. Sets the "atmosphere" for what's to come. A beautiful and enjoyable read, Joe. Thanks for sharing)
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so much beauty in this poem.... excellent work here poet.
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awesome ; )
Joe, Loved this write my dear brother! Just awesome! the picture reminded me of the top of the mountains. Remember Joe? All the stars shining so brightly? And what a wonder it was to see? I sure do! Thanks for sharing all your work with me and everyone on the site, You are a great writer, And who knows,,,, maybe this is your calling! Love your sister Veronica aka{smileywinks}
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I love that last part....it kinda looked like a triangle too Joe LOL
I will have to carry that part with me too Hun that was just beautiful
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A very creative piece here, your words go well with this also!
Keep up the great works here, this was full of imagery!
Thanks for sharing Joe and pen on!
-Timothy -
'slide,
my Love,
down moonbeams,
into the arms of my forever'
oh my... my, my,my. i must say, you have taken away my breath with this one. i so love that last part, it echoes in my head. i will carry it with me. you sing to me here.
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This is lovely... My fiance's name is Joe; I love him, but I wish he'd write me a poem even half, this good. Hell, I'd be happy with a really bad love poem, if he wrote it. I'm adding you to my favorites.
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Star~shine and moon~beams
A beautiful place to be
Gliding through your dreams
Little haiku there for you Joe This whole thing was just beautiful...the poem...the PICTURE
What else can I even say????
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Beautiful write Joe.
Sherri
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Oh Joe!
Is this the picture of the painting that I couldn't make out on your author's page? It's so very, VERY beautiful!
I can't wait to see how this progresses. Hope you're enjoying your new found busy-ness. So it's not a word - what are you gonna do? Sue me?
~~~~~Love & Blessings, Janet~~~~~
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softly lovely
aahh, light and elegant
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Such a good Question Joe ??
Way to beautifullll this is ..i could stay here all day
looking at this background!!
Just a wonderful idea to keep changing the
poem..that would be so neat to do!
Oh what "sweet dreams" this brings to mind
this quiets the soul...
So happy it has purple in the orb!!
my favorite color..
Just beautitttful Joe! love the poem.. "can't
wait to read the next one you put with this
background" these words would make you Smileee
for a eternityyyyyyyy
breathtakinggg and lovelyyyyy
Wonderful work Hon*
Lot of Smilessssss to yaaaaaa!! ...Mina~~~
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Absoluutly wonderful and amazing!
OHHHHHHHH my!!! I LOVE what you have done with this picture! The starry background really adds to the original art! You know, ever since you sent me this picture a few weeks back, I have had Sooooooooo many ideas for a poem for it, what you have done here far exceeds anything I came up with!!!! Joe this is just exquisit! The feelings and words......oh and even the imagery in your words are soooooooooooooooooo soul touching! I could yadda, yadda, yadda all day on this........Joe you are so amazing! 
~Laura
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Joe~
I think that this picture is almost worth more than words. I think that a work in progress sounds like a fun idea though...gives you something to do all the time Beautifully done sweetie. You have such wonderful dreams
~RaiN~
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