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Milk Tea Part 3

Investigation began.
Hiroshi signalled a sign, surprisingly, Chris came out.
Investigation began.

Hiroshi signalled a sign, surprisingly, Chris came out.

'You will assist Pandora in this investigation.'

We strided in the sandy streets - with continuous beats of clicking stilettos and vehicles, the concerto of urban districts seemed a pathetic fallacy of the difficulty to find Leanne.

Who said I was a detective?

The next hours were repetitive sessions of my rhetoric - Any contacts? Ex boyfriends and girlfriends? Likes and dislikes? Appearances? Past? Such questions flood into a pool of an unknown dimension, waiting to be found.

The Lancer Evo7 roamed into the streets of confusion and urbanization, as it dived into a petite apartment in Wanchai. Paradoxically, Leanne's apartment was surprisingly small - but it was another fable as we ventured inside.

Leanne's room was the dream of all men's fantasies - pink curtains in a cranky Victorian bed, drooping with laces that make seduction a paradise. Lace underwear scattered over the drawers as if there has been a robbery; and cosmetics stacked up in the make-up theatre. It was almost a remake of Aphrodite's territory - romantic curtains with trumpets playing Fidelio.

A photo album...

I flicked the pages - reels of sexy photographs pop out. Leanne in black Lacey underwear. Leanne naked. Hiroshi planting a hickey on her neck. Hiroshi and her merging in the Victorian bed.

No wonder he adore her - she was his Venus, and he probably Zeus who was lured into her realm of ecstasies. Her shimmering black hair the waves of lust, and 5'6 body the reminiscence of a love goddess.

Chris flipped to the last page - it displayed a printed address:

                     Golden Hawk Cafe
                     112 Mattheson Road
                     Causeway Bay, Hong Kong

                     Tel: 2346 8999, take outs available
                     Specialize in milk tea and dry noodles

Chris whispered, 'Leanne was addicted to milk tea, she was a caffeineholic. Here, I sneaked her contacts.'

'How come Hiroshi got you to investigate with me?'

'I used to be her bodyguard. Until I was put in charge of arcades.'

'Wonder how you would be her bodyguard.'

'She wouldn't like guys like me, and I have the muscles. Just get yourself back on the case Pandora, you know Hiroshi can kill you if you don't find her. He loves her THAT much..'

Here's the excerpt of contacts:

Anne Ng      98475022  
Pamela Lee   95670382  Black Venus
Diana        94560281
Darling      94506033 (Dragon clan ext 2281
Chris        96778334
Monique      92557999  Red
Tyrone       99928455
Sally        92018305 Golden Hawk Cafe
Sonic        92048182
Russ         97880183 Golden Hawk
Fasio        33218489
Bran         21349109 Golden Hawk no.
Eric  *#$&   90301931

'Chris, do you mind working an extra night?' I asked.

'So long I don't get bloodshot eyes. Sure, Pan.'

'I think we may well have a field trip in Golden Hawk Cafe, and call all her nightclub fans, and the ex boyfriend.'

'Pandora, whoever who hired you is definitely too smart.'

Sure, I want to know that too. Now I know why Anton is dragging me into the case - the consequences of failure are too much for Causeway Kids to take.







Thanks to everyone for waiting this, especially zeltira! Sorry, the internet connection takes a long while to set up.

Btw, there are some mature scenes so just be aware of it.
* Fidelio - a sensual piece by Beethoven, as referenced in Tom Stoppard's Jumpers to signify a romantic scenario and lust.
*Red & Black Venus refers to night club names.
* *#$& - This indicates that Eric is Leanne's ex boyfriend.

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  • memnoch
    October 9, 2006
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    so far so good! but by now i am pretty sure the story won't end with the 4th part, so i will have to wait for the rest :-) i really enjoyed the imagery you used when they got to the victim's room, very detailed, i could paint a specific picture in my head. umm, this part was really good, one small comment though, on the line "whoever who hired you is definitely too smart." you do not need the second "who", also i would replace the "too" with "very". i think it makes more sense. great story, on to the next part...


  • Tattboy silver member
    September 27, 2006
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    Another interesting and layered chapter.

    Loved the phrase "with continuous beats of clicking stilettos and vehicles, the concerto of urban districts" it was really evocative.

    I too enjoy the recurring Milk Tea.

    Keep up the great work.

    Tattboy


  • zeltria
    September 13, 2006
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    So the plot thickens my friends. I must admit that Leanne is a very victim. She isn't the sweet angel so her death isn't such a tragedy that will haunt tender hearts, but with her connections and the circles she socializes with, you have endless possibilities for plots.
    I like it so far. She is the perfect victim. Keep on writing because I'm very curious as to how the connection with the milk tea cafe will be established more clearly. I'm waiting!