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A Night Of Ecstasy.... (Part1)

Oh yes....
It's completely dark outside.Not a soul to be seen.I give you that special "look"....
You have a puzzled expression on your face...
I get up and sit next to you...yes,now you get my drift.
You can feel my breath on your sweet face.I know what you want.
And you know what I want.All too well....

I start to unbutton my shirt....slowly;but surely.
You lay motionless....glancing at each detail of my body.
I giggle and am now half-naked.
You can't resist.You start approaching me.Closer....closer.
I stand up;eye you up and down then turn off the lights....
I go and sit in your lap.....while you...start to take off my pants.
Nothing would take this moment away....



{{To Be Continued}}...
For your reading pleasure....

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  • Makaskill
    May 2, 2006
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    Erotic

    This is hot sweet thang...Can't wait to read Part 2
  • Phrozen
    April 28, 2006
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    Augh! I gotta know what happens next!

    Phrozen

  • Lionslove silver member
    April 27, 2006
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    hmmmm......smacks lips...

    TEASE!!!! ...lol....as to the rest...the select few get this comm today as i'm rushed if i really, really enjoyed the write. (although this one was way to frickin' short...lol .pt. 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, ..etc ...asap please....lol

    Excellent piece of work!! ..flowed

    well and was a thoroughly

    enjoyable read. you may find, for

    this day, that i leave the same

    comment on others works if your

    one to check up on that kind of

    thing. for today, i write this, as

    the work demands on my are high

    and am only choosing the select

    few who's writes meet the

    standards of this comment.

    For me, unlike others, the most

    important thing in writing...or

    shall i see reading...is feeling

    an impact. ...being left with an

    impression. and obviously, that

    being said, a positive

    impression...whether it be just

    "wow'd" by the write itself in

    it's individuality and layout or

    style - then on to the

    content...the effort of the author

    to convey imagery, vision,

    emotion, and all those things tied

    up inside everything from a dark,

    eerie write, to a beautiful,

    moving romantic piece...all the

    way to the absurd, funny and far

    out of the box.

    Know that your work has had, if

    not one,...many of the positive

    effects mentioned early upon my

    read today.

    I thank you for this piece and

    found it thoroughly enjoyable!!!

    All the best to you...and keep on

    writing.....Lionslove.