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Clerihews

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__________________ THE CLERIHEW___________________________

            The Clerihew was invented by E. C. Bentley.
             Who used it to poke fun but only gently.
              He'd pick on a personal characteristic
               And elaborate without being sadistic.

The Clerihew is a short (4 lines) verse almost always about a person and forming a humorous description of that person.
It is named after the British writer Edmund Clerihew Bentley who was the first to write in this form when he used to produce them for fun as a schoolboy. When published most of Bentley's own Clerihews were accompanied by sketches. At first these were drawn by his schoolboy companion G K Chesterton, himself a well respected writer, and later by Nicholas Bentley.

The structure is deceptively simple
It has exactly 4 lines with a rhyming pattern of aabb
The first line should contain the subjects name, ideally at the end and the third and forth line should refer to some characteristic of the subject.
The rhythm of a Clerihew is often more akin to prose than poetry.

Early Clerihews where much more whimsical than those written today. Their accuracy was also less important.            

These are a few of my own.


                In her early years, Mrs Thatcher
              Gained the sobriquet Milk Snatcher.
             But she was called the Iron Lady when
               She took control from Number Ten

                            **  **  **

             Those who get to know Mr Tony Blair
           Treat him with great respect and care.
          But his next door neighbour Gordon Brown
            Is getting ready to steal his crown.

                            **  **  **

                   President George W Bush
           Is looking for new villains to crush
        He's tackled Al-Quaida and Sadam Hussain
       Now he's dreaming of new dragons to be slain.



oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Edmund+Clerihew+Bentley
Please don't blame Bentley for the examples here. As someone once said "they are a poor thing but mine own"

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  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    Thanks VJ I am glad you liked them. I was lucky enough to pick up one of his books (Baseless Biography) and will be adding all the contents to Oldpoetry in the next week or so.
    Jim S

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    Maggie (not Peggy) had enough trouble with Ronnie without looking after George dubya. Still she might have taught him something about geography.
    Thanks for taking the time to write.
    Jim S

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    Thanks for your kind words.
    Enjambment is a common feature of Bentley's Clerihews. The style he developed wouldn't work as well without it.
    I suppose I should adjust the capitalisation but in his book new lines are capitalised everytime and that was before the days of word processors or even electronic typewriters.
    Jim S

  • Ink Shadow
    March 31, 2006
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    This is nice, good rhymes, and form looks complete...unlike the forms we see invented these days, online! I especially liked the second one, on Blair. In first one I am bit concerned about the enjambment between L3 & 4.

    D

  • Vickie J
    March 31, 2006
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    I love a good clerihew. Thanks for the background info on its origin-that was interesting. I was considering doing my next contest on this form.
    Your's were perfect-gentle fun for sure!~vj
  • Revwilliamfoos
    March 31, 2006
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    george knows just who he will bomb next. if she could i would have loved to have peggy the iron lady as our first female pres.
    we would not be in this mess keep writeing
    love the papa

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    You are more than welcome. Thanks for writing.
    Jim S

  • March 31, 2006
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    I found this interesting, thanks for sharing this with us

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 31, 2006
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    Thank you for you reading and writing.
    Jim S

  • Rachael70
    March 31, 2006
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    Great !!!

    I really like this.
    It's nice to read something for fun and enjoyment.
    It to lay back and laugh. Your writting seems to be
    just for that! The enjoyment of others and yourself.
    The best kind of writing is the writting that makes people happy, the 2nd best changes the world! Always remember what comes first!

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 30, 2006
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    I'm glad you liked it Linda. I will try a few more of my own soon but meanwhile do check out the guy who started it all.
    oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Edmund+Clerihew+Bentley
    I have written a biography and am slowly adding his work.
    Jim S

  • MoonsShadow gold member
    March 29, 2006
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    this is surely different, I must say you did your home work.. keep booking and posting, thank you so much for sharing..
    Linda

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 29, 2006
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    Thanks for reading and writing princess I will add a few of my own Clerihews from time to time but I will also be adding a lot more to E C Bentleys pages on Oldpoetry as I work my way through his books.
    oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Edmund+Clerihew+Bentley
    Jim S

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 29, 2006
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    Thank you Stone Lion.
    I am glad you not only read this but took time to attempt to use it.
    Jim S

  • StoneLion
    March 29, 2006
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    I thank I-Like Rhymes,
    who took some of his times!
    to teach this neat Clerihew
    a form to me brand new!

    Thanks for informing about this. I'd never heard of it before and always like to hear about new forms and ways of writing. Take care
  • theprincess
    March 29, 2006
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    thank you for this i iwill bookmark for furture reference

  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 29, 2006
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    Glad you liked it. I re-discovered them when I founda copy of one of Bentley's original books in an old-book shop.
    Jim
  • Ir.muse
    March 29, 2006
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    I love new forms my dear uncle. This one is so cool.
    I think I'll try it one day soon.
    Shahrzad
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