the smells...iodised,salty,moist...the sea called out for me today,but i couldn't answer to her call,i was bound by manners and clothes...
it's weird how sometimes you can't do what you really want coz it's just not "ok" to do it...
so anyways, staring at the sea
infinity revealed before my eyes
and her...standing there with her careless hair and her smile...
that smile...makes me want to own the world just to lay it at her feet
i suddenly wish i was the wind,yeah i wish i could be shapeless and light so i could relentlessly kiss her skin
and my hands,they'd hold on to her hips as we fly
away away away
i catch a glance of her looking at me and so i melt,turn into vapor and fade
away away away
today i've witnessed beauty
in so many ways i'm overwhelmed by all this... kinda flying yeah...i'm high on life and it's been a while since something so clean and great as this has taken over me
one day you'll read this and remember you were my joy for a while
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Beautiful
I love the sea
It always finds a way to charm me.
Yes, being under the mesmerizing effect of the sea is just magical. Just standing there looking is therapy for the soul.
I loved the fact that you share you diary here with us all.
Great Idea..Kinda thinking of doing the same
Love
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Lanenting a lost lovge, are you? Now that's very sweet. It's great that you are at a point where you can seperate the memories of love from reality. I mean by that you can go back, and isolate the gradure of love from the agony, especially a lost one.
Believe me, I have a point even though I'm making a lousy shot at explining it. And about rushing on, and just jumping into the sea, I'm surprised that you didn't. From what you wrote, you were ingrossed into the essence of life, so why let poeple take that away from you. I mean they are going to bitch and grind whether you do or don't. In teh end, it's those small moments of stolen happiness that amtter. Don't ever let another one like that escape you! -
Beautiful poem
Keep writing I loved the imagery here 
Thanks for your comment on my poem
All the best
Pozo
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Man i really don't know what to say. This is truly amazing i don't know what to say other than that... i'm speachless. all i can say is... It's good to be around and witness all this happen in front of my own eyes
. Great piece my friend.
Elie.
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