To whomever it concerns,
Tell my family I'm sorry, I just had to go. My burdens have grown far too heavy, the memories of once have finally burned their way through my soul. I'm just trying to save myself...leave while there's still a little something left within me to give; save myself before I'm completely engulfed into the empty void I'm destined to. What's left of my heart aches beyond belief, my tears have spilt until there were no more - why can't I save myself? I have nothing left. You all should be able to see that by now! I have NOTHING left. At least let me go with some pride, well, what little pride I have managed to muster. Just promise to remember me as I once was, full of laughter and spirit. Remember me before my light burned cold. Just please, let me rest.
Love,
MindyI wrote this while in prision. I have plans to reword my thoughts and write it in poetry form, just not right now.
To whomever it concerns,
Tell my family I'm sorry, I just had to go. My burdens have grown far too heavy, the memories of once have finally burned their way th
Tell my family I'm sorry, I just had to go. My burdens have grown far too heavy, the memories of once have finally burned their way th
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Just one thing, keep admiting to yourself this isn't you, it's a disorder, and it's something people live with, and you can too. I know there are a lot of people who care about you, and I know the tendency is to shut them out, and that they can't possiably begin to understand what you're going through, but you can let them, you can talk to them, not just to people on here. I hope you are doing alright, I think you should go back and read your author page though, and think about what you wrote whenever you posted that, I think it's more a message to yourself about your goals than anything. Best wishes.
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Words show what none other can for they are that of your own experiences and circumstances for which they are written... This piece gave me the idea of a suicide that was about to happen and didn't... Don't make any changes, it means you aren't sure or have regrets of what's been posted here... Trust yourself and your words... Don't betray them for someone else, and if it means you lie to yourself that then leaves you with no one to trust in.
Well done and captured with many provoking thoughts to leave the reader wanting to know more and read other writes. Take care of yourself and those you love. Always ~star -
Awww, that was heartfelt. You've been going through alot lately, Hang in there. With jesus you can overcome all. What did you go to prison for?
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...wow. prison is a harsh thing...i personally have never been there but know people who have. i will be looking for the poetic version. good job.
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i like it the way it us. it shows a variety of emotions in a way that doesn't get confusing or boring. i can see it as a poem, but i love it in the letter format.
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very strong
This is a very hard bit of writing to comment on. I would think not to make any changes as you will want to come back and read this to see where you "were". Although written in a time of great sadness I could still see some hope in it as you were
concerned "let me go with some pride".
Very strong, very clear emotions in this.
John
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