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~Memorials~ AP AllWrite Launching Our Second Year

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Here it is… Our May/June issue and it’s all about “Memorials”. 

 

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The Retreat has worked very hard to present to you some exceptional articles as we head into our second year.  Joyce (Redstormy) has joined our Retreat team, and is still settling in, but we look forward to great things from her.  The Retreat team is very talented indeed!

 

Runawaytrain explains the difference between “Show vs. Tell”, and how images are the key to showing instead of telling – painting a picture in our minds.

 

Nam’s Critiquing” by David Arnold offers some great insight into the art of critiquing.  Nam has written many columns and is well known around Allpoetry for his critiquing tips. He has taught classes on the subject, and is always willing to help another poet who struggles with critiquing. We appreciate his input this month.

 

Balladeer has brought us “Things That Are No More”, walking us through the past and into the present.  Looking back at the past and comparing it to the now, so many things have fallen to the wayside, and what was popular ‘back then’ is often forgotten all too soon. We thank you Balladeer, for this bit of nostalgia.

 

A Young Man’s ‘Monuments’ Tour” by Eric Lee is sure to give you cause to sit up and think. Another war, another monument, another list of names - each with a family that will never be the same because of their valor. 

 

There are many great offerings in this issue.  You really won’t want to miss it. 

 

Get to know our editors, kirbysman and symitar as you read an in depth interview with them.  I am sure you will discover something you never knew about these two very special, very dynamic and talented individuals. 

 

We have many amazing articles for you in this issue, including some great pieces posted on the darker side of AllWrite.  Our salute to memorials includes “Unsung Heroes”, “An International Monument Depicting Torment”, “The Wall”, “Ghandi”, “Why Memorials”, “A Voice for Africa”, “In Memorandum”, “Distant Remnants of War” and “A Memorial To the Crown Prince of Terror”, an in depth look into the life of Vincent Price by Allwrite in the Dark’s very own gifted writer, Pamela Walston.  Having grown up in a home with a father who was a big fan of horror flicks and two brothers who followed in his footsteps, I found this to be exceptionally interesting.  Thank you Pamela, what an awesome piece of work!

 

One of these articles is sure to please the literary palate in each and every member. 

 

Our Special Feature by Michael Mack (Balladeer) is sure to put a lump in your throat as you read through each line.  How will we be remembered?

 

Cvillelisa has penned an excellent review of For David by Pataliyah.  I have great respect for those who have taken on this task.  They diligently offer their own amazing insight into the mind of fellow members month after month.  Thank you for another great review!  It is always a pleasure to see things from a fresh and different perspective.

 

As always, our trophy winning poems and stories are the cream of the crop, in both the AllWrite section and the AllWrite in the Dark section of our magazine.  Each member on the magazine team works very hard to bring you some of the best reading, regardless of where your personal interests lie. Be sure to look at the winners, but all the entries were worth reading.  Our contests have brought us some wonderful poetry from our members.

 

As always, remember to read our regular monthly features and don’t forget to visit the pages of our very own Granny Goose.  She’s sweet, she’s saucy, she’s full of good recipes and great tips, and worthy of a visit!  She is sure to delight the child in you.     

 

I would also like to mention that Kevin has fixed our feedback link so you can all leave comments now and they will go directly to the magazine - no more emailing feedback.  Just go to the Feedback link on the contents page and leave us your comment.  If you are commenting on a particular piece in the magazine, please let us know which one you are referring to.  We like to let our author’s know what others think of their efforts.  Your feedback means very much to us and we would love to hear from you.

 

Thank you Kevin!  He is always hard at work, moving us along the path of improvement. He’s got several things in the works, and they will be launched soon, so be on the lookout! Kevin’s vision keeps him hard at work.  Shhh – don’t talk too loud, he’s probably debugging!

Please leave feedback and let us know what you like, what you don't like and what you would like to see in future issues.  This is very important.  This is YOUR magazine.


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  • Touchof1der gold member
    June 13, 2005
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    I'm so pleased you enjoyed Jim's piece. We were very happy that he agreed to be a guest writer for us. Please take time to check out some of the other articles and leave feedback for the staff, letting us know what your thoughts are regarding the articles.

  • Touchof1der gold member
    June 13, 2005
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    Thank you NurseyPoo, I do hope you will leave feedback and let our staff know your thoughts!

  • Kendall Campbell
    June 13, 2005
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    Well i've already read Jim Dunlops piece and its exceptional work so I now must give the rest of it a reading over. Congrats for continueing success, take care and God bless.

  • NurseyPoo
    June 13, 2005
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    I am so glad you featured the magazine. I always enjoy reading it. All of you do such a great job. My hat is off to all of you.
    ~~~~~POO~~~~
  • Belle
    June 13, 2005
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    I hope everythjng goes well with it all!!

  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    June 13, 2005
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    Congrats to all of you for keeping the idea alive, and functional even though there have been many times when that was hard to do. For standing in tough against some less than savory criticism, and for the work each put in - behind the scenes ( as I know from my work with all of you ).

    May you have continued success in the next year and onward.


    ¤´¨)
    ¸.·´ ´´ ·¨)
    (¸.·´(¸.·¤hims/Lisa

  • Touchof1der gold member
    June 13, 2005
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    I hope you do check out the magazine Rob and when you do, please be sure to leave feedback and let us know what you thought of it, how we could improve, what you would like to see in future issues, etc.

  • faderman1959
    June 13, 2005
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    I read it last time and it was great so I expect that this time it will be even better and you seem to out do yourselves with each new issue! I will be sure to check this one out also. Thanks for the information!

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    June 8, 2005
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    Award Winning!

    Thank you for this link and all the valuable information you share.
    I for one know this will be informative and a must read for me.
    All the best to you and yours, Namaste Blessed Be.
  • PerfectStranger
    June 8, 2005
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    This looks like it will be great to read. I love reading other's poetry and about poetry itself because it gives me new ideas and it also gives me inspiration to write more and write better in-depth pieces. I'm looking forward to it.

  • soft repose
    June 8, 2005
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    thank you for sharing all of this with everyone here at all poetry. I think this is a fabulous idea and I would like to applaud your effort. Thank you for enlightening me and so many others, keep up the good work!

    Peace.

  • xXxSeductiveLovexXx
    June 8, 2005
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    This is awesome!
    I think this is a wonderful idea, and there are so many people who are worth prasing..

  • Blazing White Wolf
    June 8, 2005
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    well thank you for featuring the allwrite magazine again making us all aware it is out thanks kimberly
    love and light
    blaze

  • MystifiedPoet
    June 8, 2005
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    Awesome job on this piece!!

  • NoIQ gold member
    June 8, 2005
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    Kudos to the entire Allwrite team. The topics, and selections, are well-conceived, thorough, and a cross-section of great AP talent. I commend you for the effort, including the correction of the link. I look forward to perusing the "pages" of your excellent work. Again, my sincere congratulations to all involved - editors, writers, contributors, and delighted readers.

  • Pisces Pond
    June 8, 2005
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    Cool,looking forward to reading this. Great job people.

  • Elrenia
    June 8, 2005
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    Nice and patriotic page, but the first word of every line gets lost in the blue line. Makes it a tad hard to read at times. Thanks to most of you for your hard work. I may have to jump in and check it out.

  • masterblaster gold member
    June 8, 2005
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    Hi, don't know what happened was in the middle of writing to you and suddenly found myself on another page, oh well here we go again, great , looks like this is going to be a great read and have put it in memory to read this week end, all the best you have worked hard to give us something special. hugs Di

  • CountryCousin
    June 8, 2005
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    Look forward to this.

    This will be interesting to read indeed and I will look forward to it. Anything about the military and patriotice I salute to begin with.

  • TaraKM silver member
    June 6, 2005
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    Nam's Critiques sound very interesting. Glad to be informed.

  • suseann gold member
    June 6, 2005
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    It certainly sounds very interesting.I had no idea we had this on A.P.,but will take a look at their efforts soon.Thanks for the information.~~Suseann

  • leo2 gold member
    June 6, 2005
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    Thanks for enlightening me. I'll be sure and give it a gander
    Thanks again for sharing this with all of us.

    Frightendove

  • crystaldust gold member
    June 6, 2005
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    crystaldust 06-06-05 07:48
    I am looking forward to reading this issue very soon. Not this week, because I'm gearing myself up to move and have to downsize. It looks like a very interesting read and thank all those who have spent time,energy and dedication preparing it.

  • lady Rose
    June 5, 2005
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    cool

    definatly going to check it out!~
    This is presented very very well, and I love the bakground!
    Interedsting definatly sounds interesting!!

  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    June 5, 2005
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    How wonderful for all! A great mix of minds in this endeavor Thank you for your time.

    (I like and respect the image of Iwo Jimo. It included my darling Daddy who is now with the Lord (and everyone else who was there!). Just to think that the image matched the very film that was taken at that very moment.)
    Edited on Jun 05, 9:56 p.m. because ''.
  • ecrivain01 silver member
    June 5, 2005
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    Good job on the issue this time.

    Thanks for inviting me to write a column. I hope somebody reads it.

  • Mistress Dark Queen
    June 4, 2005
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    this is a very unique and good column write and if i'm not mistaken there's a write where anyone is invited to add-on some lines to the poem and it's dedicated to Allpoetry

  • shadow cast
    June 4, 2005
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    thanx for informing me on all this great info. i liked it alot and always love learning things. great job!

  • kryspin
    June 4, 2005
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    Good promotion pre-release column. I'll be sure to check the new editions. Best wishes and keep working hard behind the many forms of desks and tops you have running

  • faderman1959
    June 4, 2005
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    I'll be sure to check it out!

  • raspberry Greeters member
    June 4, 2005
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    Good that u updated us with this info.. Looking forward to read

  • Johnny Wheeler
    June 4, 2005
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    Excellent

    Hi Kimberly,
    This was quite interesting and informative. I will take a look at Allwrite. Thank you for sharing this with us all
    --Johnny

  • carlspenc1
    June 4, 2005
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    There is some awesome work here
    this is the first time I have even noticed this part of AP
    GREAT work by some GREAT people.
    thankz for sharing.

    I shall lookout for your works again

    Happy Anniversary

    keep up the great work.

    your fellow poet

    Carl

  • lordoftherings gold member
    June 4, 2005
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    It's already One Year...Happy Anniversary. There are never enough compliments surrounding the world to embrace how your magazine and dedication of collegues have changed the face of AP with this publication. And here's to a few more! Gregg

  • DefinitiveFreak
    June 4, 2005
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    This is very interesting. A lot of hard work has gone into producing the magazine. I'm sure a lot of people will thoroughly enjoy the results of your efforts. Well done on such an informative issue.
  • Stella Shall
    June 4, 2005
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    I lookk forward to reading this I can never learn enough about poetry I am always open to more.
  • City wolf
    June 4, 2005
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    Thank you for letting me know these things. I really appriciate.
  • Red Red Rose
    June 4, 2005
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    I thank you sincerely for opening my eyes to this column. I will be reading it and hopefully learnig, also. Thank you for posting this enlightening column!
    Sincerely,Linda

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    June 4, 2005
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    thanks for the information...this would be one of those things that I would love to be able to curl up on the bed with and read leisurly. Any ideas about taking it to press and making it available by subscribtion in the future????
    Reenie

  • pattyann4500
    June 3, 2005
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    Thank you for this wonderful column. I look forward to reading the pieces. Hugs, Patricia

  • -BlackKnight- gold member
    June 3, 2005
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    They spelled my name wrong...they forgot the dashes at either end of my name. That's alright though; I'm just happy and honored that I'm in it at all along with other great writes like horus8, for example. Never thought that would happen .

  • Jacki D
    June 3, 2005
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    I have never read allWrite but I think I'm going to have to check it out. I have no excuse for not reading it, and apparently I have been depriving myself. Jacki

  • tic
    June 3, 2005
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    nice, it was reasonably ontime.. looks like it has content too

  • CarterTachikawa
    June 3, 2005
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    Wow, awesome. Of course I'm going to have to check it out. I was meaning to enter of the contests this time but I forgot. Again. Oh well, time to see what's inside this issue!

    ~CT

  • Midnight Lace
    June 3, 2005
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    This was an awesome issue and I am not saying that cause I am in it, but because it truly was. So many wonderful articles and interviews. I love the Unsung hero and the interview with Symitar. She is a very special lady and has a beautiful heart. This is byfar one of my favorite issues. to everyone that helped put this issue to together.
    Midnight Lace
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