- Slamming her fist into her arm until her fingers tingle and her nerves scream white-hot pain with every looming impact. Pitiful, isn't it?
- The second comment wasn't significantly longer but was far more constructive. It demonstrates that you actually took the time to read and comprehend the poem.
- I want to describe to you the writhing agony that my heart finds itself in upon each shimmering full throated chord throbbing through the air.
