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I am trying to put a book of my poetry together. I have picked out which ones are going to work together, i have illustrations for every one, but i Need feedback.
I suck at spelling and grammar, not to mention the flow of some of my older poems is
sloppy.
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I drink, i smoke, and i am not a good person because of it. Me and my poems are fiction. They are not to add propoganda to parting and self harming activities.
so be smart and stay young. try not to grow up to fast. -
i have not got any comments on my new story
"the next chapter", and i really would like some one to sugest, even proof read, or simply tell me how it made you feel.
this is only the ending but it will give an idea of what it is about.
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this is another poem not related to my page, but need to spred.
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how do we know friends are friends? by Deathless1, from Deathless1EVERY ONE PICKS THEM SELFS BEFORE OTHERS, WHAT HAPEND TO SELF SACROFICE?
FRIENDS FOR FRIENDS, ALWAYS THERE, OR NEVER.
HIDEING TRUE FEELINGS, AND DISHONESTY IS WHAT I SEE. -
study suggest by Deathless1, from Deathless1i have been feeling this way for a while, and it might make me a Paranoid psycho, but either way i feel it. so i wrote a poem about it, sence it is not related to my page i have done this.
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