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- trip
- final draft
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I've added to it.
I need to edit it insanely, but first I needed to get it off the scraps of loose-leaf paper and onto a computer screen where I can look at it clearly. -
outline:
story of him
show possible ways to view the whole experience
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refer to try #1 "initial blurb"
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for a writing group, "Women's Literary Union," we have to write something (3-5 pages) on the topic of whether or not good/bad experiences are created by our point of view.
there are many different aspects to the topic, and I've started writing like 8 different things. I hate them all.
so I'm going to try to type them and see what happens from there.
I'd love criticism, but I know they suck... so.. only constructive criticism please.
please keep in mind these are ROUGH DRAFTS....
this one seems to be a little too abstract, going off-topic.
Outline:
a screen begins to grow on this first-person girl
- looks back at old pictures- sees it faintly
- soccer game as example
- sees everyone has it
- can control it by wearing fresh "clothes"
- clothes have gotten old, wet, dirty
try to deal/see situations without screening
-go on with life
everyone is self-orientated so situation= good/bad depending on possible benefits (does it make me look good? what do I get?) - read my friends
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I'll be gone for a little over a week
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[x] I am shorter than 5'4.
[x] I think I'm ugly, sometimes.
[x] I have many scars.
[] I tan easily.
[x-i change it a lot] I wish my hair was a different color.
[] I have friends who have never seen my natural hair color.
[] I have a tattoo.
[x] I am self-conscious about my appearance.
[]I've had braces.
[] wear glasses.
[x-just lypo] I would get plastic surgery if it were 100 safe, free of cost, and scar-free.
[x] i've been told I'm attractive by a complete stranger.
[x] I have more than 2 piercings. <---i want more
[x] I have piercings in places besides my ears.
[] I have freckles.
♥ School/Work:
[x] I'm in school.
[] I have a job.
[x] I've fallen asleep at work/school.
[] I always do my homework.
[x] I've missed a week or more of school.
[x] I've been on the Honor Roll within the last 2 years.
[] I failed more than 1 class last year.
[] I've stolen something from my job
[] I've been fired.
[x] I've skipped school.
♥ Health:
[] I was born with a disease/impairment.
[x] I've gotten stitches.
[] I've broken a bone.
[] I've had my tonsils removed.
[x] I've sat in a doctors office with a friend.
[x] I've had my wisdom teeth removed.
[] I had a serious surgery.
[x]I've had chicken pox.
♥ Experiences:
[] I've gotten lost in my city.
[x] I've seen a shooting star.
[x] I've wished on a shooting star.
[] I've seen a meteor shower.
[x] I've gone out in public in my pajamas.
[x] I've pushed all the buttons on an elevator
[x] I've kicked a guy where it hurts.
[] I've been to a casino.
[] I've been skydiving.
[x] I've been an abuse victim.
[x] I've gone skinny dipping.
[x] I've played spin the bottle.
[not in one, but in two] I've drank a whole gallon of milk in one hour.
[] I've crashed a car.
[x] I've been Skiing
[x] I've been in a play.
[] I've met someone in person from the internet.
[x] I've caught a snowflake on my tongue.
[] I've seen the Northern Lights.
[x]I've sat on a roof top at night.
[x] I've played chicken.
[x] I've played a prank on someone.
[] I've ridden in a taxi.
♥ Relationships:
[] I'm single
[x]I'm in a relationship
[] I'm engaged.
[] I'm married.
[x] I've had someone cheat on me.
[] I've gone on a blind date.
[] I've been the dumpee more than the dumper.
[x] I miss someone right now.
[] have a fear of commitment.
[x] I have a fear of abandonment.
[x] I've cheated in a relationship.
[x] I've been the cheatee (you were the person some1 cheated on their gf/bf with)
[] I've gotten divorced
[] I've had feelings for someone who didn't have them back.
[x] I've told someone I loved them when I didn't.
[x] I've told someone I didn't love them when I did.
[x] I've kept something from a past relationship.
♥ Sexuality:
[x] I've had a crush on someone of the same sex
[] I've had a crush on a teacher.
[x] I am a cuddler.
[x] I love to flirt.
[x]I've been kissed in the rain. =]
[x] I've hugged a stranger.
[x] have kissed a stranger.
♥ Honesty/Crime:
[]I am a terrible liar.
[x] I've done something I promised someone else I wouldn't
[x] I've done something I promised myself I wouldn't.
[x] I've snuck out of my house.
[x] I have lied to my parents about where I am.
[x] I am keeping a secret from the world
[x] I've cheated while playing a game.
[x] I've cheated on a test.
[] I've run a red light.
[x] I've been suspended from school.
[] I've witnessed a crime.
[x] I've been in a fist fight.
[] I've been arrested.
[] I've shoplifted
♥ Drugs/Alcohol:
[x] I've consumed alcohol.
[] I regularly drink.
[] I've passed out from drinking.
[] I have passed out drunk at least once in the past 6 months.
[] I've smoked weed
[x] I've taken painkillers when I didn't need them.
[] I'm a stoner.
[] I've snorted cocaine.
[] I've eaten shrooms.
[] I've popped E.
[] I've inhaled Nitrous.
[] I've done hard drugs.
[x] I have cough drops when I'm not sick.
[] I can't swallow pills.
[x] I can swallow about 5 pills at a time no problem
[x] I have been diagnosed with clinical depression.
[x] I shut others out when I'm depressed.
[x] I take anti-depressants.
[x-recovering.against.my.will.] I'm anorexic or bulimic.
[x] I've slept an entire day when I didn't need it.
[x] I've hurt myself on purpose
[x] I'm addicted to self harm
[x] I've woken up crying.
[x] I've cried myself to sleep.
♥ Death and Suicide:
[] I'm afraid of dying.
[x] I hate funerals.
[] I've seen someone dying.
[x] Someone close to me has attempted suicide.
[x] Someone close to me has committed suicide.
[] I've planned my own suicide.
[x] I've attempted suicide.
[] I've written a eulogy for myself.
♥ Political/Social Attitudes:
[x] In general, I don't like people.
[kinda] I'm a feminist.
[x] I'm very outgoing.
[] I listen to political music.
[] I don't like Bush because he is dumb.
[] I don't like Bush with my own reasons to back it up.
[x-used to be, don't care much now] I am for Bush.
[x-don't act it though....] I'm religious.
[x] My attitude is, "If you've got it, flaunt it."
♥ [x] My answers are totally honest -
amazing friends and family here on AP.
- #6.
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- all I needed was the sun
- If you have never experienced true loneliness, consider yourself very blessed.
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humor me by reading.
my boyfriend scribbled all over a picture of me and my good friend who just happens to be a boy. He left me though.
and didn't understand why I got mad. - just a link for my author page.
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