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what do you think of my writing?

stealing this from everyone else.

tell me about my writing.
love, hate. praise, criticize.

but remember, constructive criticism.
don't just say "you're awful" & leave it at that.
at least tell me why you think so.

thanks! <3

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  • AllThatRemains
    October 14
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    You know I think it's wonderful.

    It has a strength to it-- sometimes subtle, yes, hidden under layers of quietness and delicacy, but always there. It's like walking through a frozen cave with all the icicles hanging from the ceiling-- it's so beautiful. When you breathe, it frosts you into place and takes you over, and you never know when one or two or a thousand of those icicles is going to shoot down and puncture your entire being.

    Unless, of course, it's a rant-poem-- then it's much more dangerous. XD


  • aeolia
    October 14
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    duhh, i like it. it's not usually my style of what i like to read, but you're so good that i actually like reading it, lol.


  • styrofoam
    October 14
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    i look forward to reading your poems and i wish you'd write more often.


    • decode
      October 14
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      I write all the time. I just haven't posted them on allpoetry as of late.
      and thank you. <3


  • heavenbird gold member
    October 13
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    haha i was hoping this wouldn't become a trend. xP

    i think it's very delicate. it's like lace or like the color seafoam or like pieces of thin paper. good, certainly.

    • decode
      October 13
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      haha I figured that everyone else - or at least 2-4 people - were doing it, so I thought why not.

      and thank you. that's sweet of you. <3

  • I think you are a remarkable writer and you have a wonderful talent, especially when it comes to conveying genuine, raw emotion into your work.

    • decode
      October 13
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      I don't feel like I'm especially talented. but I do pour a lot of myself into my writing, so I appreciate that aspect being noticed. thank you.

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