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Séasúr Amhrán

This is a form of my own creation. The example provided was written by me.

    In this form we have four quatrain stanzas with a strict syllable count and rhyme scheme. There are three refrain lines, two alternating and one hook/anchor line.  L1, L3, & L4 are the refrain lines. L1 & L3 of stanza one alternate in subsequent stanzas. L4 repeats at the end of every stanza. The minimum stanzas is four. The rhyme scheme is a/b/a/b or a/b/a/a

     

    The refrain lines are characterized by alliteration with 10 syllables per line. L2 of each poem is 8 syllables.  Here is the progression of each stanza. Note: the L1 & L3 refrain lines are numbered to show how they are to alternate from stanza to stanza.

     

    Lines

    Syllables & Rhymes

    1

    xxxxxxxxxA1

    2

    xxxxxxxb

    3

    xxxxxxxxxA2

    4

    xxxxxxxxxB

     

     

    1

    xxxxxxxxxA2

    2

    xxxxxxxb

    3

    xxxxxxxxxA1

    4

    xxxxxxxxxB

     

    -Or-

     

    Lines

    Syllables & Rhymes

    1

    xxxxxxxxxA1

    2

    xxxxxxxb

    3

    xxxxxxxxxA2

    4

    xxxxxxxxxA

     

     

    1

    xxxxxxxxxA2

    2

    xxxxxxxb

    3

    xxxxxxxxxA1

    4

    xxxxxxxxxA

     

     

    Example

     

    E-li-si (Grandmother)

     

    Painted face portrays the etchings of time;

    she sits her circle on the Earth.

    Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;

    our walk began in the pain of life's birth.

     

    Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;

    The Spirit Father knows our worth.

    Painted face portrays the etchings of time;

    our walk began in the pain of life's birth.

     

    Painted face portrays the etchings of time;

    drum beats a season of rebirth.

    Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;

    our walk began in the pain of life's birth.

     

    Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;

    her wisdom shared in blessing's girth.

    Painted face portrays the etchings of time;

    our walk began in the pain of life's birth.

     

    -Tammy Knott

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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  • XLadyElinorX
    October 8, 2009
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    sounds complicated but interesting! I'll have to try it sometime... Elinor