In this form we have four quatrain stanzas with a strict syllable count and rhyme scheme. There are three refrain lines, two alternating and one hook/anchor line. L1, L3, & L4 are the refrain lines. L1 & L3 of stanza one alternate in subsequent stanzas. L4 repeats at the end of every stanza. The minimum stanzas is four. The rhyme scheme is a/b/a/b or a/b/a/a
The refrain lines are characterized by alliteration with 10 syllables per line. L2 of each poem is 8 syllables. Here is the progression of each stanza. Note: the L1 & L3 refrain lines are numbered to show how they are to alternate from stanza to stanza.
| Lines | Syllables & Rhymes |
| 1 | xxxxxxxxxA1 |
| 2 | xxxxxxxb |
| 3 | xxxxxxxxxA2 |
| 4 | xxxxxxxxxB |
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| 1 | xxxxxxxxxA2 |
| 2 | xxxxxxxb |
| 3 | xxxxxxxxxA1 |
| 4 | xxxxxxxxxB |
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| Lines | Syllables & Rhymes |
| 1 | xxxxxxxxxA1 |
| 2 | xxxxxxxb |
| 3 | xxxxxxxxxA2 |
| 4 | xxxxxxxxxA |
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| 1 | xxxxxxxxxA2 |
| 2 | xxxxxxxb |
| 3 | xxxxxxxxxA1 |
| 4 | xxxxxxxxxA |
Example
E-li-si (Grandmother)
Painted face portrays the etchings of time;
she sits her circle on the Earth.
Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;
our walk began in the pain of life's birth.
Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;
The Spirit Father knows our worth.
Painted face portrays the etchings of time;
our walk began in the pain of life's birth.
Painted face portrays the etchings of time;
drum beats a season of rebirth.
Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;
our walk began in the pain of life's birth.
Grandmother tells her tale in sorrow's rhyme;
her wisdom shared in blessing's girth.
Painted face portrays the etchings of time;
our walk began in the pain of life's birth.
-Tammy Knott

but interesting!
I'll have to try it sometime...
Elinor
