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Sneadhbhairdne

Examples by me, further examples can be found by clicking the link to the column below.

The sneadhbhairdne

(sna-vuy-erd-ne),  a syllabic Irish quatrain* stanza form, alternates octasyllabic and tetrasyllabic lines, both ending in disyllabic words. Lines two and four rhyme; linethree consonants with both,. Every stressed word in the fourth line must rhyme,and there is alliteration as in rionnairdtri-nard*. The poem circles back to the first syllable, word, or linewith which it began., as in all the Irish forms (xa)(xb)(bc) [bb(xb)]

 

Lines     syllables and rhymes

  1.           xxxxxx(xa)
  2.           xx(xb)
  3.           xxxxxx(bc)
  4.           bb(xb)

 

** quatrain - fourline stanza

** rionnairdtri-nard (run-ard tree-nard) is an Irish quatrain stanza of hex syllabic linesending in disyllables.

 


Turco, L. (2000). The book of forms: A handbook of poetics. Hanover, NH: University Press of New England.



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Example

Semblance

From whence we came so we return

dying cinders

our lives mirrored in the seasons

the end begins

 

Dust to dust, embers to embers

nature's semblance

is nurtured in Mother's bosom

hence we became

 


 

The Celtic Circle

Intricate lines weave unbroken;

a path is set.

A mystery in life kept secret;

plied intricate.

 

Building toward a place inside me;

sacred blessings,

bestow gifts of strength expressed.

Mandala's egress

 

I seek to find the place I dwell,

where hope has wings.

my voice, a breath of singing,

melody rings.

 

Autumn Debut

 

Autumn light through a cascading

leaf canopy

sheds foliage screams in silence;

cacophony

 

Graceful ballet - dance on the breeze;

chilled wind blusters,

harvest moon makes lunar debut.

Samhain believe

 

 

 

by Tammy Knott 

 

 

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  • whyspr gold member
    September 29, 2009
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    wow, that's amazing. I could barely wade through the defanition on that one. I kept thinking.. could they put this in english please. You have a very strong grasp of forms and terms Little Eagle.


    • Tammy Knott Greeters member
      September 29, 2009
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      Hah

      That's why I bought the book. I could barely follow it, I had to read the examples and my examples are still not perfect.