1. Comment when I critiqued a piece that was full of text-messaging poem and implying that it did not fit what poetry I desire in my contests.
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I wasn't going to respond to your comments a bout my poem for the simple reason that you didn't get what I wrote and why it was written the way it was. All poetery is visual on some level. My work here plays with that fact two fold. If you own a cell phone and have texting features you probably understand the context of this poem more.
My command of the English language is superior to yours by the mear example of your incoherent comments on my poem. Woof! That first sentence come on. If your going to be a contest host and judge make sure whatever your going to write as comments/advice and so on is at least clear. I suggest in the future please have someone else write for you so that your crippled command of the written English language won't be so glairing...
Anyway now that I have wasted my time with you and could of been doing something more worth my while, like picking my nose, I hope this helps you pull your head out of your ass.
Much Love......
and later: "...For a writer your quite limited in your ideas what poetry is about, the expression is not only in it's words...."
2. When I responded to someone commenting on my poem, that my metaphors did not match meaning - or something of that sort.....
...I hope that you can laugh easily at all the crits you get from your work.As it so happens I did read your poem.Perhaps you did not get the "meaning" of what I was looking for in my contest.I think wisdom should have brought you a certain tactfulness instead of "ha ha look at me".If you go out there with such a hard-assed attitude you are open to falling down.
as always
"The Contest Holder"
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You know how I feel about it, since I went to her "poem" and woofed a lil' myself. 
I couldn't believe how bad the entry was. I hesitate to even refer to it as a poem in any way. What really ticked me off was her piss-poor attitude, hateful remarks and overall arrogance. Let alone her attack on one of my most precious people, who never seeks conflict and is always a constant source of support and inspiration. We all love you, Woman...those of us with any sense, anyway. 
The ones who bark and bite merely do so from jealousy and frustration. Let'm howl at each other and leave the true-spirited writers alone. 
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lol You Go Girl!!
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yes, I think the writer has a strong point there: it seems that picking something... would be a better use of their time...PK
( See now there it is again- I told Moses we needed another commandment...: Thou shall not show thine hind parts in public...[ he didn't listen to advice either] ) -
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PK
This is brilliant advice!! Hope this makes our friend feel better. Frans
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lol. You tell im girlfriend...
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