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I'd love it if you guys could read my new[est] poem and help me edit/make it better?
Here's the link;;
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5500347
There are reward points on it too, so we both can get something out of it[:
Thanks guys, I'm looking forward to your help.
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let me know if you need help with any others, I don't mind.
But you're hard to criticise in any way, which is a compliment. -
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Thank you♥
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