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The guidance of wise men and the obedience of fools

When I was a youngster and, occasionally, listening to what my teachers would tell me, there were a lot of certainties in the things they would say. Not the least of these pronouncements were about what they called poetry, My English teacher, or should that be “teacher of English” believed in three types of writing; Poetry, Prose and Poetic Prose. The later was a category that had something of both the others but was definitely outside both of them. The whole panoply of play writing fell into that catch-all grouping as well as certain other, less easily definable pieces.
Prose had rules of grammar, of spelling and punctuation, of layout and length but nevertheless covered a very wide area. Poetry followed all the rules of spelling and most of those about grammar too. It had its own versions of punctuation, layout and length but it also had some quite independent rules of its own that covered such areas as rhythm and rhyme, lines and verses, voice and register and still more which were even more unwieldy than those. I was intimidated by the complexity of these rules and firmly believed that it was only by strict adherence to them that I would be able to write anything worthwhile. Thus, apart from the compulsory essays and other verbiage required of the inhabitants of the educational system of my time, I rarely tried to write anything apart from the occasional letter or shopping list.
At a later stage I undertook a course in “Service Writing” as part of my training as an officer in the R.A.F. This introduced some new rules an regulations principally concerning conciseness, clarity and completeness. Just as I had managed to do with my early courses I managed to reach the required standards in prose, both academic and military, and achieved what I consider to be my writing licence. I wasn’t brilliant at it and would only use it when forced to do so; but it was there in the store room of my mind. Equally clearly in my mind though was the fact that I had no endorsement for poetry.
Many years later something annoyed me and for some inexplicable reason I chose to vent my spleen in verse and equally inexplicable I decided to read it to a group of friends at a local folk club who were more used to hearing my So-So renditions of other peoples words in the form of folk songs. This was received with a gratifying burst of applause that now, with the benefit of hindsight, I believe contained a large proportion of politeness and sympathy for the spirit of my polemic and not much for its literary merit.
Since then I have plied my pen with increasing regularity if not skill. I have begun many hundreds of pieces and some of them have managed to emerge as fully fledged poems. The majority of them have suffered perfectly justifiable infanticide before reaching the safe haven of my personal archives. Of those that have survived most are only one step above doggerel (if that) but there are some which I like to think would persuade Mr. J J Waddington-Feather, my “teacher of English”, to grant me that elusive item; my Poetry Licence!
In that time I have also learned the truth of that old maxim “Rules are for the guidance of wise men and the obedience of fools.”
When driving a car one learns to slavishly follow the dictates of the highway code and the rules of driver’s etiquette for situations not covered in that esteemed publication. However once one has passed one’s test and have gained a reasonable proficiency at driving in various conditions it becomes apparent that there are situations when those black and white rules cannot be rigidly adhered to and one learns to “bend” them slightly in normal driving, and to sprain them in some emergency situations, as well as to break them completely in off-road excursions and competitions. In the same way once a writer has learned his (or her) craft by following the rules laid down in the text books that writer can also start to experiment with minor infringements of and major deviations from those rules on occasions.
It is still necessary to learn the rules and how to apply them until one has established a good standard of writing ability and developed, for want of a better phrase, one’s own “poetic voice”. However once a writer has reached that stage and has gained his (or her) own poetic licence they can then be considered wise enough to decide when to deviate from those rules.
What is not necessary, and indeed what should be avoided at all costs, is the abolition of all such rules and the instigation of a free for all system. A system that would, I believe, lead to the demise of poetry as an emotional transport for the majority and leave it as a vehicle for the self-elected and self-labelled “modern” poets.


In case you are still interested, this is that first poem http://allpoetry.com/poem/1541506

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  • Wandika gold member
    March 31
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    Excellent -



    My friend Jim-

    It is with brilliance you did show
    That your words speak a truth
    It’s only with knowledge we grow
    No wisdom as a youth

    When they can say we’ve paid our dues
    It’s then we can explore
    When we can listen to our muse
    And others just ignore

    For they may say when we are done
    That we had done it right
    As they work on what we’d begun
    While teachers makes them write

    Your friend Jim


    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      March 31
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      "When they can say we’ve paid our dues
      It’s then they can explore"
      You sum it up perfectly Jim, Thank you


  • Watuwant silver member
    March 30
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    A nicely written piece, Jim, and I rather enjoyed it. I agree too, and think that learning the "basics" is necessary to fully attain the potential of poesy. You've written a persuasive 'argument' for the point of view discussed here. And it was very personable to read as well.
    Good one!
    peace
    doug

    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      March 30
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      Thanks for the words of encouragement Doug. I sometimes think I am a lone voice crying in the wilderness on this so it is nice to hear people agreeing.
      Though the piece was triggered by a "How To" book on writing poetry (with which I don't always agree) this was started more as an exercise in plain old fashioned writing. I don't think I did too bad for 45 mins work over lunch

  • I will choose to ...

    comment before clicking on to the link for your cited first poem! I throughly enjoyed the way you shared the information in this article. You have offered some perfectly good sense for everyone with lots of clues to 'the hows, whys & wherefores' of poetry writers, regardless of their level for appreciating & sharing it. It is important to know all of the basics before branching out and yet, there remains much confusion, in my mind as to the "rules of punctuation for poetry"! There are many opinions for it and as to date I have been unable to settle on "just what is considered correct!" I appreciate that you took this time to write this column and to lend an eye, through personal experience, in order to clarify what some may be interested in. Thank you so much! jy

    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      March 30
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      Many thanks for your comment on this piece. I am currently reading a "How To" book on poetry and finding myself screaming at some of the emphatic certainties of the authors that flout all the things I learned / absorbed as a child. I then remembered a maxim from one of my R.A.F. trainers and got the idea. Then this was written in a cafe today whilst having lunched.
      It is so good to hear that some of my instinctive reasoning strikes a chord with readers.
      Jim

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