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Poem: My heart beating in your chest.

This poem is written by me about someone who i truly love,
and i wanted comments on the poem because i'm going to show him the poem, so i want it to be the best it can be.
Your long brown locks twist around my fingers,
It feels like silk; fresh from the silk worm,
Your eyes send butterflies to my stomach,
Your lips are irresistible,
Metal snakes snack on your lips,
Your lips speak a language that my lips yearn for,
I love the warmth from your arms,
I love the warmth of your breath,
I love the warmth of your heart,
That is beating in my chest,
In return for my heart beating in yours

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