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How Is It That the Snow, American Life in Poetry 193

The first two lines of this poem pose a question many of us may have thought about: how does snow make silence even more silent? And notice Robert Haight's deft use of color, only those few flecks of red, and the rest of the poem pure white. And silent, so silent. Haight lives in Michigan, where people know about snow.

How Is It That the Snow



How is it that the snow
amplifies the silence,
slathers the black bark on limbs,
heaps along the brush rows?

Some deer have stood on their hind legs
to pull the berries down.
Now they are ghosts along the path,
snow flecked with red wine stains.

This silence in the timbers.
A woodpecker on one of the trees
taps out its story,
stopping now and then in the lapse
of one white moment into another.


American Life in Poetry is made possible by The Poetry Foundation (www.poetryfoundation.org), publisher of Poetry magazine. It is also supported by the Department of English at the University of Nebraska-Lincoln. Poem copyright (c) 2002 by Robert Haight from his most recent book of poetry, "Emergences and Spinner Falls," New Issues Poetry and Prose, 2002. Reprinted by permission of Robert Haight. Introduction copyright (c) 2008 by The Poetry Foundation. The introduction's author, Ted Kooser, served as United States Poet Laureate Consultant in Poetry to the Library of Congress from 2004-2006. We do not accept unsolicited manuscripts.

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  • HopeForUnity
    December 5, 2008
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    never seen snow before so i wouldnt know what your referring to.. but this was eyeopening to all of us sheltered kids
    thanx for sharing


  • waydownuponjoy
    December 5, 2008
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    Very nice and ...

    for a Floridian the imagery is one that we miss, especially during the holidays. It's always a pleasure to be introduced to new poets and your author notes were perfect. Thanks for sharing and keeping us poets up-to-date with the latest. jy


  • suseann
    December 5, 2008
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    I think maybe that woodpecker was hearing a far off echo he was making. And stopped to see if he was the only one around. Ever notice how sounds carry farther on a blanket of snow? He/the author,brings all in nature to the reader through his well executed verse.


  • Melodies
    December 5, 2008
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    A wonderfully thoughtful write...

    Aye, snow does all of that... and it is beautiful to see and to even just think about. Snow could be used metaphorically in so many ways and you have inspired me, good Poet Sir.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    December 5, 2008
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    The imagary draws you into the stillness of this season, we are having summer and thus being the oppisite of what you are experiancing at this moment. As the snow wrappes itself around all we know and things change in the stillness, we are left knowing that even this change is not forever...


  • dewfall
    December 5, 2008
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    still moment of wonder

    what i like about it is that it describes a moment in time, a stillness, and a delicate,(as a snowflake), sense of wonder... i am reminded for this reason of "Adelstrop":
    Edward Thomas
    Adelstrop
    Yes. I remember Adlestrop —
    The name, because one afternoon
    Of heat the express-train drew up there
    Unwontedly. It was late June.
    The steam hissed. Some one cleared his throat.
    No one left and no one came
    On the bare platform. What I saw
    Was Adlestrop — only the name

    And willows, willow-herb, and grass,
    And meadowsweet, and haycocks dry,
    No whit less still and lonely fair
    Than the high cloudlets in the sky.

    And for that minute a blackbird sang
    Close by, and around him, mistier,
    Farther and farther, all the birds
    Of Oxfordshire and Gloucestershire.


  • ziniicecream
    December 4, 2008
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    I love the bare bones way he writes. Thank you for posting this gorgeous poem. It makes me miss Michigan!


  • sunoir
    December 4, 2008
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    I've had that moment living in Winterpeg as we call it.
    He captures it so beautifully. Thank you for sharing his work. *S*


  • Chuck Johnson silver member
    December 4, 2008
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    Snow

    Snow absorbs sound. In tests in the miltiary on dark winter nights, I've tested the effect of the (3 on a match). In case you've never heard of this, it is from WWI where a sniper would watch from his viewpoint the enemy lines and if a match was struck, that was his clue to get ready, as the second man lit his cig, the sniper drew down and aimed, and the third man dies.

    In the tests we conducted on snows ability to deaden sound we use the unwrapping of a pk or cigs then the sound of a lighter cap being thrown back and then the stricker being tumbled. In the summer in the exact same spot, you can hear all of this and by useing the side vision you can draw a more or less accurate shot. However, in a snow covered terrain you will hear none of this.

    AS for the poem, nice one. This tells the tale of Silence well and protrays the beauty of a snow covered glade where the deer pass in review and leave no clue....


  • Kari gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    Oh...I loved this one. Thanks for sharing Kevin.


  • Violinstrings silver member
    December 4, 2008
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    nice

    thanks for sharing these great works with us


  • dragonscales
    December 4, 2008
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    great read

    that was very good. i think that the silence comes from the fact that (1) the snow as fluffy it tends to absorb the sound or (2) the silence is not amplified it is just a psychological kind of thing. it is just the lonliness that seems to eminate when you are all alone


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 4, 2008
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    for white is the feeling of the snow and surrended to the colors that sloftly flow...as the wine is dropped upon its whiten glow it to becomes the silent voice within us all..

    sighs softly and thanks you for sharing this moment


  • astralshepherd gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    thank you, Kevin, for bringing this wonderful poem to share with us - (if only i ..... \sigh\ )

  • Judith Chandler
    December 4, 2008
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    Thank you for sharing this Robert Haight piece with us.

    That hushed feeling after a snowfall is almost like being in church. The poem made me feel like a trip to the country would be nice though you do get the newfallen snow feeling here in the city. Not much snow as yet.

  • carole21
    December 4, 2008
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    nicely done . . great feeling and images . . !!


  • Kevin Moderators member
    December 4, 2008
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    snow is such a beautiful poetic thing! I am reminded of Frost's 'stopping by the woods on a snowy evening', our poem of the day at oldpoetry a few days ago.

    I like the idea of birds trying to tell stories in their rhythms...

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