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Breaking Someone's Heart

I hate to break peoples' hearts, but sometimes I just don't have a choice. Usually something happens to make me feel bad about keeping the person back from dateing other people... people who arn't so ugly... like me.
I just want to know if any one knows how it is to have a terribly broken heart, or has broken someone's heart terribly. I have been through both, but I'm not sure how to put it in the words I want in poems. I need someone to help me.

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  • xxLovesSuicidexx
    November 22, 2008
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    Hunny what's wrong?

  • Inspired By Till
    November 19, 2008
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    This might work

    Well, i suffer from a broken heart and it always helps me(when writing about it) to start off with how that person felt and then briefly describe what you wanted out of the relationship and then(as i like to do) make "extreme statements,cloaked as allegories"...make it obvious that you have been deeply hurt (by description, not by just coming out and saying it)