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Gift from a (very close) Friend

One of my closest friends, Mariusz (pronounce the 'sz' as the english 'sh'...he's Polish) wrote me a poem...his first serious poem ever. He sent it to me as part of my surprise birthday gift ('surprise', because I neither knew of nor expected it)...

He is not a native speaker (naturally) so...keep that in mind when you are reading, should you notice any mistakes, or anything that seems out of place... :-)
Rachel - As Your Name Sounds

Pure as purest gold
White as the whitest snow
Bright as the unfading light
Innocent as a lamb.

No storm will make you afraid.
No trial will cause you to break.
No sorrow that you won't bear.
No fall that will make you lay.

As every trial strengthens you;
As every sorrow makes you move;
As every fall will make you rise;
As you can do all things with Christ.

For every cloud, even the darkest one,
Has silver lining that portends sun.
And would we ever value its light
if we had never even seen the night?

So you stand pure, shining, robed in snow white,
Washed by Jesus' blood, in His fire purfied;
In you, His light unfading, through His Word bright.
Redeemed and innocent - all thanks to the flawless Lamb.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    Yes, Yes! Rachel!

    Dear Rachel..if any gift was needed any words needed these were what you needed to hear..I see you robed in white..a saint that has known trials and suffering, but you are not overcome, you are victorious...a divine instrument in the hand of God... Of all gifts this is what you needed, and God saw you got it through your friend!Wonderful words!


    • maktub
      October 31, 2008
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      I am SO glad you agree...it is amazing...how friends sometimes do not know the whole story, yet can still know the right words...
      Thank you!!!


  • januaryrain gold member
    October 31, 2008
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    a beautiful poem, a wonderful birthday gift.
    Happy belated Birthday
    Sharon

    • maktub
      October 31, 2008
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      It was, literally made me cry - so much joy had to overflow
      ....thanks a million for the birthday wishes... ☺


      • januaryrain gold member
        October 31, 2008
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        Your welcome, I hope you have a great year. God be with you.


  • Night FireWolf
    October 31, 2008
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    Nice...That dude is pretty talented. Happy belated Birthday. Looks like I missed it.

    • maktub
      October 31, 2008
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      welll....I wasn't exactly advertising it....Thanks, though ☺
      Yeah, I think he is...he's a sweetheart...one of my best friends.

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