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honesty

i love you.
can't you realize it?

(orginally posted on my DeviantART account)
i love you more than anything that will ever roam the face of this earth. i'll give you the stars and i'll give you the moon, i'll give you whatever you want. i just wish you'd realize how much i need you, how much i love you. you know how when you post something on here, you have to put in keywords? for every single poem that i've ever posted the keywords deal with you. they always said 'i'll love you forever and ever' or 'you're my babydoll'. i never told anyone that. it was my own private secret, well it's not really a secret anymore, is it? ha, funny. and here you have me stripped down to my bones which will probably grow brittle and useless as i get older. i'm only scared about the carpal tunnel that i'm slowly developing. but i need to get to the point, i need you more than people need religion, i need you more than the earth needs the sun, i need you more than peanut butter needs jelly. i love hearing your voice, i love your laugh, i love your...everything. i'm sorry i never told you beforehand. i guess it's too late now, babydoll. and if i don't see you again, hear your voice again, or even dream you again, please remember this, because this is the most honest i've ever been.

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  • Dienush Greeters member
    October 11
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    Wow, this is so honest and intense. I think she should have appreciate it more... Thanks for sharing

  • a n e s t h e s ia
    October 10
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    purely- honest enough to make my eyes bleed.
    she'll know that.
    just give it time.. you do all you can.

    • Space Invaders
      October 10
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      this is exactly what she said:

      'You misinterpreted my poem.

      It wasn't about you.


      Me and Draconarius got into a fight.
      That's who all those poems were about.



      Thanks for your honesty, though.'

      • a n e s t h e s ia
        October 10
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        .. you should be relieved, then.. and stop vomitting.
        and at least you've made your feelings clear enough.
        you blame yourself way too quickly- i thought you meant something specificly horrible had happened..
        -and you'll get your love in a mirror.


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