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Am I really that hard to read?

I'm quiet.

I won't look you in the eyes for more than a second

I'm fiddling with random things- trying to be distracted

I keep saying I'm ok.

I'm shaking or trembling

I am hiding my face

I'm chewing on my lip- or something else

Something.is.wrong



I am looking at you

with a sort of sadness you can't quite spot-

straight into your eyes

I hold it-

then look away

I do this multiple times

I.am.waiting.for.you.to.say.a.specific.something.

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  • Janetheplain
    August 29, 2008
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    I can relate to this when relationships start to slow down, come to an end, it's very sad.
    -Jane


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    August 26, 2008
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    i love this.
    so much.
    i wish i could applaud.
    ♥


  • hopelessly-broken
    August 26, 2008
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    beautiful peice....
    truely amazing. i LOVE it.
    your such a great writter


    "I won't look you in the eyes for more than a second

    I'm fiddling with random things- trying to be distracted"

    thats the same as me...

    take care
    luv HB
    xoxo


    • Hell In Harmony
      August 26, 2008
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      it was more of a ranting/journal post than a poem
      but if you liked it, either way is good=]

      thank you..