The first verse: The rhyme scheme is abcbac and the syllable count is 10 8 6 8 10 6 - line end 2 and line beginning 3 rhyme too so the 'b' rhyme begins line 3.
A brand new poem meets a fresh wild day,
fingers tap smiles into the air,
their bubbles are intense,
little circular sparkles share
colourful visions as they pop the way
forward; future's suspense.
A / brand / new / po / em / meets / a / fresh / wild / day, - 10 syllables, rhyme a.
fin / gers / tap / smiles / in / to / the / air, - 8 syllables, rhyme b.
their / bub/ bles /are / in / tense, - 6 syllables, rhyme c at the end of the line, but also rhyme b to begin the line.
lit / tle / cir / cu /lar / spark/ les / share - 8 syllables, rhyme b.
col / our / ful / vis / ions / as / they / pop / the / way - 10 syllables, rhyme a.
for / ward; / fu / ture's / sus / pense. - 6 syllables, rhyme c.
The second verse is still in tune with the first verse for it must use the c rhyme to begin, so in other words it will start with a rhyme for 'suspense.' The rhyme scheme for this verse is def and the syllable count is 3 4 7.
Now many have said to me over time with my poetry that certain words do not rhyme, and I sadly shake my head, people seem to think that only true rhyme counts, this is not the case. One can use first syllable rhymes, end rhymes etc, and though they may appear at first glance not to rhyme, they do indeed rhyme.
Commence now
with creation,
words that sing love's warm beauty.
Here I am using an end line rhyme to begin the second verse, so though Com / does not rhyme with sus / the end lines do rhyme - mence / pense.
Com / mence / now - 3 syllables, rhyme d.
with / cre / a / tion, - 4 syllables, rhyme e.
words / that / sing / love's / warm / beau /ty. - 7 syllables, rhyme f.
A lot easier I think to do this verse as after the first verse your mind should be roaming the rhymes and count and this verse is only 3 lines long.
Now verse three returns to the same pattern as used in verse one, abcbac with the same syllable count used 10 8 6 8 10 6.
A slight difference in relation to verse one with the beginning of this, the third verse must start with the f rhyme which ended verse two. So the word 'beauty' is the word to rhyme with to start off the verse. Again do not be limited to what people class as true rhyme, end line rhyme etc is fine.
Free; they converge on laughter's curve and play
the swirls of something from nowhere,
there's a magical sense,
it leaps from a rainbow's cool stare,
hits with quiet precision life's ballet
with wonderful incense.
Free; / they / con / verge / on / laugh /ter's / curve / and / play - 10 syllables, rhyme a.
the / swirls / of / some / thing / from / no /where, - 8 syllables, rhyme b.
there's / a / mag / i / cal / sense, - 6 syllables, rhyme c at the end of the line, but also rhyme b to begin the line.
it / leaps / from / a / rain / bow's / cool / stare, - 8 syllables, rhyme b.
hits / with / qui / et / pre / ci / sion / life's / bal / let - 10 syllables, rhyme a.
with / won /der / ful / in /cense. - 6 syllables, rhyme c.
For the fourth verse we return to the second verse rhyme scheme and syllable count, but as has been the internal rhyme theme, we again start the fourth verse with the same rhyme used to end the third verse, so here it will be 'incense.' The rhyme scheme is once again def and the syllable count is 3 4 7.
Fence know how,
its blade's action
throws glints of toned poetry.
Fence / know / how, - 3 syllables, rhyme d.
its / blade's / ac / tion - 4 syllables, rhyme e.
throws / glints / of / toned / po /et /ry. - 7 syllables rhyme f.
Note: Different people in different parts of the world will count syllables differently and though there are syllable counter sites, they are not to be classed as gospel, this would apply too to rhymes, just because an online site says this rhymes and that does not, do not treat that as written law, play with words in your mind, do they rhyme to you when you sing them together? For example, I was once told book and duck do not rhyme, yet they do in my head!
Okay, the final verse. This differs from the previous four, this time we are using only 2 lines, each line has a syllable count of 10 and the rhyme is gg. Again though as with the internal rhyme theme - the beginning of this final verse starts with the rhyme end of the previous one, in this case the word is ' poetry.'
The final line of this final verse also plays with end line beginning line rhyme, the rhyme used 'g' to end line one, here the word is 'curl' is also used to start the final line.
Draughty sighs flutter on the lips that curl,
twirl delicate notions which now unfurl.
Draugh / ty / sighs / flut /ter / on / the /lips / that / curl, - 10 syllables, rhyme g at the end of the line and rhyme e starting the line.
twirl / del / i / cate / no /tions / which / now / un / furl. - 10 syllables, rhyme g at the end of the line and the beginning of the line.
And there you have it in a nutshell! Okay I know reading lengthy explanations can be a bore, but they do help. It is wise I think too to look at examples of the form itself, I tend to do that a lot when I see new forms to me.
So, the whole poem will be:-
Delicate Notions
A brand new poem meets a fresh wild day,
fingers tap smiles into the air,
their bubbles are intense,
little circular sparkles share
colourful visions as they pop the way
forward; future's suspense.
Commence now
with creation,
words that sing love's warm beauty.
Free; they converge on laughter's curve and play
the swirls of something from nowhere,
there's a magical sense,
it leaps from a rainbow's cool stare,
hits with quiet precision life's ballet
with wonderful incense.
Fence know how,
its blade's action
throws glints of toned poetry.
Draughty sighs flutter on the lips that curl,
twirl delicate notions which now unfurl.
Thank you for your time.
This is called a 'Versaic'
Poetic Visions
Delightful music streams into senses
as the sunset twirls the horizon
with relaxation's energy,
quiet powerful wisps warmly
generate fine-toned earthly fortune
in time's spirits with beautiful pulses.
Anticipation's bloom devours sighs,
clouds of cool love crash across open skies,
heartbeats skip emotional defences
to receive the pleasures of pure passion,
such a deliciously wondrous journey.
Natural scenes whisper poetic
visions as Heaven's whip-lashed sonic
atmosphere spirals dark sequences;
shadows perform a lightning question.
A grandiose river coyly
retreats to the sublime country
where the broken night waits humbly.
Verse one:
First line 10 syllables with rhyme A
Second line 9 syllables with rhyme B
Third line 8 syllables with rhyme C
Fourth line 8 syllables with rhyme C
Fifth line 9 syllables with rhyme B
Sixth line 10 syllables with rhyme A
Verse two:
First line 10 syllables with rhyme D
Second line 10 syllables with rhyme D
Third line 10 syllables with rhyme A
Fourth line 10 syllables with rhyme B
Fifth line 10 syllables with rhyme C
Verse three:
First line 9 syllables with rhyme E
Second line 9 syllables with rhyme E
Third line 9 syllables with rhyme A
Fourth line 9 syllables with rhyme B
Verse four:
First line 8 syllables with rhyme C
Second line 8 syllables with rhyme C
Third line 8 syllable with rhyme C
The Lady And The Squire
Time's rhythmic clock scatters seconds around sensuality,
musicality wraps slow steps below flutters of romance,
glances collide with imagination's wondrous explosions -
implosions of erotic breath wandering beauty's fancy,
barley wine kisses whisper love to flaps of delicious chance,
advance and retreat; feet sleepily wave to the closed curtains,
millions of dreams are preparing their soft magical potions.
Oceans of pleasure have rippled before two bright-light spirits,
bracelets catch sighs that fall with elegant graceful persistence,
resistance is crumpled on the carpet's wild patterned fibres,
feathers swirl white linen thoughts into the fragrance of poets,
portraits swing tones of artistic strokes through tender temperance,
conscience delivers songs which twirl these emotional authors.
Lovers are caught in constellations' harmonic desire;
fired flames which search now for release in buttered silent shades,
glades in distant lands send invitations across to warm hearts,
darts of splendour openly watch syllable slips and admire,
choirs of appreciation accompany lady-squire.
I have decided to name this form a Melodic.
a ( a ) b ( b ) c ( c ) a ( a ) b ( b ) c ( c ) c ( c )
( c ) d ( d ) e ( e ) f ( f ) d ( d ) e ( e ) f ( f )
( f ) g ( g ) h ( h ) i ( i ) g (g) g
It is 15 syllables per line
and at the beginning of every new line
you rhyme with the last word of the previous line.
The first verse is 7 lines,
the second verse is 6 lines
and third verse is 5 lines.
The rhyme for the whole poem is end line rhyme -
abcabcc
defdef
ghigg
Each new line beginning must be the same rhyme as the
end line rhyme of the line before it.
Fragrant Face
A swirl of sanity
caresses personality
as love captures hearts.
Spirits open with generosity
while creativity spills the arts.
And a brand new day strolls
across life's rhythmic rippled scrolls,
there's cool passion here,
it flickers furiously then consoles
all emotions that gather up fear.
Tonight's a heat wave's sigh,
character is plucked from the eye
then blessed with fine grace,
a rose stretches notions towards the sky
with a beautiful wild fragrant face.
An Allegorose
(6 syllables A rhyme)
(8 syllables A rhyme)
(5 syllables B rhyme)
(10 syllables A rhyme)
(9 syllables B rhyme)
(6 syllables C rhyme)
(8 syllables C rhyme)
(5 syllables D rhyme)
(10 syllables C rhyme)
(9 syllables D rhyme)
(6 syllables E rhyme)
(8 syllables E rhyme)
(5 syllables F rhyme)
(10 syllables E rhyme)
(9 syllables F rhyme)



it is good knowing how to read yes.,


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Maria 











lol I hope many poets will want to try writing an indi.
You might wonder how I acquired the jewels, but then I would have to tell you and it is a secret.
lol You can tell I love your indi. 







