It's called Clastic Mir.
Here's an example poem:
http://www.allpoetry.com/poem/3515212
Alternative link:
http://72.232.127.136/poem/3515212
The sequence is syllables:
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
And the letters make a pyramid with the 8 being shorter than the 7's on either side to look something like this.
b
bb
bbb
bbbb
bbbbb
bbbbbb
bbbbbbb
bbbbbb
bbbbbbb
bbbbbb
bbbbb
bbbb
bbb
bb
b
Similar to that. Oh, by the way, you don't have to have the beginning and end similar at all in the way of what words you use. Just for those who were curious.
If you have any questions, go ahead and ask!
~Asa of the Poets of Flight
Read this please. About a new form. I invented it, so naturally, I am going to like it. Give feedback, ask questions, try it out. See if you like it. Thanks so much!
~Asa of the Poets of GPS
~Asa of the Poets of GPS
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to be honest i think i may be lost on syllables its sad i know can you help me
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All the lines up to seven have the same number syllables as the number. For example:
Line one has one syllable.
Line two has two syllables.
Line three has three syllables.
And so on.
Until line eight. Line eight has six syllables. Line nine has seven syllables. Line ten has six syllables. Line eleven has five syllables. Line twelve has four syllables. Line thirteen has three syllables. Line fourteen has two syllables. Fifteen, the final line, returns us back to one syllable.
If you don't understand still tell me.
Thanks for your interest!!!
~Asa of the Hobbling Greens of Repulsion
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mmmm...ok..i get it...i think i might try it as well...maybe...lol...nice work babe...lol..love you
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I might try it
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Interesting; quite complicated but in a positive way
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I have to get going but I am diffently going to need some better understanding of this i read your example poem its awesome and though i understand the point of this i honestly don/t know too much about the laws of writing if you get my point okay then have to go to work so i look forward to reading what yopu write me back later on today
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uhhh wtf? i dont understand well g2g
changing classes cya or ttyl next period kk -
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Please be more specific? What part do you not understand?
Thanks for reading though.
~Asa of the Poets of Take-Off
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