Sunshine Twist

Another new form created by ME!

The first line is two Syllables,
then a sentence or phrase 8 syllabes that goes with it,

next one is three syllables and
a sentence or phrase 8 syllabes that goes with it

then four syllables
and a sentence or phrase of 8 syllabes .

and it is repeated again
for a total of 6 verses.

Links to the ones I have done so far

Of Love http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3031490

Heart's Memory http://allpoetry.com/poem/3137206

Desire's Dream http://allpoetry.com/poem/3141134

Dancing Through Dreams http://allpoetry.com/poem/3147032

Heart's Worries http://allpoetry.com/poem/3153980


Mirrored Sunshine Twist

Baby-It's You And Me
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3216280

Today's World http://allpoetry.com/poem/3573620

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  • penman gold member
    July 8, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very different and unique. Thank you for sharing.

  • earthstar
    July 2, 2007
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    Very creative. This is a challenge. I like what you called it a sunshine twist. We all could use more sunshine in a life time. I am very impressed by it. Take care. Hope you are doing well take care love b

    • sunshinegirl
      July 2, 2007
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      I hope you try to do this one my friend. I find they are alot of fun to write. Take Care my friend, love ya

      Nyetta