The style of my poetry is reflected upon how I feel, I write anything from crazy descriptive, narrative poems.
Wanna contact me...celestialsaturn@hotmail.com
*Starred Confusion*
I fall over, in confusion
My thoughts have left my body
But as I drift into murky waters
I can no longer see.
I stare up at the stars
Tiny shards of diamonds
And sparkling glass studded
Into the endless royal navy tapestry
I stumble to the rock-ridden shore
And slowly sit by the raging fire
Small white-wax candles are aflame
And I rest my hands opposite
Mirthful conversation becomes loud
That has no beginning or end
Spur of the moment words
Is what just happens to spill
I glance around and realize
I have never been so loved
I have never felt this way
It feels too different, too surreal
Can someone pass me another drink?
Wanna contact me...celestialsaturn@hotmail.com
*Starred Confusion*
I fall over, in confusion
My thoughts have left my body
But as I drift into murky waters
I can no longer see.
I stare up at the stars
Tiny shards of diamonds
And sparkling glass studded
Into the endless royal navy tapestry
I stumble to the rock-ridden shore
And slowly sit by the raging fire
Small white-wax candles are aflame
And I rest my hands opposite
Mirthful conversation becomes loud
That has no beginning or end
Spur of the moment words
Is what just happens to spill
I glance around and realize
I have never been so loved
I have never felt this way
It feels too different, too surreal
Can someone pass me another drink?
- Last seen on Nov 19 7:21 AM. Member since September 13, 2004.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 235 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "just slap my self-centered face.".
- I am a 19 year old guy (Canada)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a University Student.






- I have 235 comments, 1 contest, 62 poems
My Poetry
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As the early sun peers through birch branches
At standstill weeping for life's inequalities18 lines, 1 comment, March 6 -
black nights always take their age
as i sit relentlessly wishing for sunshine18 lines, January 21 -
I'll slip you a new copper penny
To bring summer's safe arrival.25 lines, 1 comment, October 18, 2008
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xXCadyBabbiXx on January 12Hello x]
Wonderful page. -
miss.misery on January 30, 2008michael.
read my story and comment it.
i need someone to tell me if it's good or bad or awful or terrible. -
miss.misery on January 17, 2008yeah, it is a rather great motto.
let them eat shit.
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Broken Memory on November 5, 2006Hey darlin, HC... GRRRR!!!!! *hits a random person with a nail-bat* it's enraging to say the least, but it's comin' 'round I guess, I've been hanging with Brett and a few other people not so much Cassie anymore.... How's Frontenac?
