i don't think that writing has to have a certain structure, it doesn't even have to rhyme or flow. it just has to express how you feel, and it's a good poem. i'm obsessed with song lyrics
i'm kristi..that's basically all you need to know about me
writing is a beast inside you that's waiting to break free. that's what i say anyway.
emosong.ytmnd.com/
AIM- kristichewastraw
BUCKLE UP: it makes it harder for the aliens to suck you out of your car!
part of what it's like by everlast:
I've see a rich man beg
I've seen a good man sin
I've seen a tough man cry
I've seen a loser win
and a sad man grin
I heard an honest man lie
I've seen the good side of bad
and the down side of up
and everything between
I licked from the silver spoon
drank from the golden cup
and smoked the finest green
I stroked daddies dimes at least a couple of times
before I broke their heart
you know where it ends
it usually depends on where you start
there is pain in comfort
there is comfort in pain
but i find piece of mind
at the comfort cafe
misery's at my shoulder
sorrow's my next of kin
but they've grown to be familiar
so i look at them as friends
take me home to where i belong
take me home, though the road is long
i'll make a bed of roses
lay me down in the grass
until i find myself in comfort
comfort at last
~book called "comfort"
FAKE PLASTIC TREES LYRICS(radiohead)
Her Green plastic watering can
For her fake chinese rubber plant
In fake plastic earth.
That she bought from a rubber man
In a town full of rubber plans.
Just to get rid of itself.
And It Wears Her Out, it wears her out
It wears her out, it wears her out.
She lives with a broken man
A cracked polystyrene man
Who just crumbles and burns.
He used to do surgery
For girls in the eighties
But gravity always wins.
And It Wears Him Out, it wears him out
It wears him out, it wears him out.
She looks like the real thing
She tastes like the real thing
My Fake Plastic Love.
But I can't help the feeling
I could blow through the ceiling
If I just turn and run
And It Wears Me Out, it wears me out
It wears me out, it wears me out.
And if I could BE who you wanted
If I could BE who you wanted,
All the time, all the time
outside.staind.
And you can bring me to my knees...Again
All the times when I could beg you please....In vain
All the times when I felt insecure....For you
And I leave my burdens at the door
But I'm on the outside
I'm looking in
I can see through you
See your true colors
Cos inside you're ugly
You're ugly like me
I can see through you
See to the real you
All the times that I felt like this won't end
Was from you
And I taste what I could never have
Its from you
All the times that I've tried
My intentions, full of pride
But I waste more time than anyone
But I'm on the outside
I'm looking in
I can see through you
See your true colors
Cos inside you're ugly
You're ugly like me
I can see through you
See to the real you
All the times that I've cried
All this wasted, it's all inside
And I feel, all this pain
I stuffed it down, it's back again
And I lie, here in bed
All alone, I can't mend
But I feel, tomorrow will be okay
But I'm on the outside
And I'm looking in
I can see through you
See your true colors
Cos inside you're ugly
You're ugly like me
I can see through you
See to the real you
i'm kristi..that's basically all you need to know about me
writing is a beast inside you that's waiting to break free. that's what i say anyway.
emosong.ytmnd.com/
AIM- kristichewastraw
BUCKLE UP: it makes it harder for the aliens to suck you out of your car!
part of what it's like by everlast:
I've see a rich man beg
I've seen a good man sin
I've seen a tough man cry
I've seen a loser win
and a sad man grin
I heard an honest man lie
I've seen the good side of bad
and the down side of up
and everything between
I licked from the silver spoon
drank from the golden cup
and smoked the finest green
I stroked daddies dimes at least a couple of times
before I broke their heart
you know where it ends
it usually depends on where you start
there is pain in comfort
there is comfort in pain
but i find piece of mind
at the comfort cafe
misery's at my shoulder
sorrow's my next of kin
but they've grown to be familiar
so i look at them as friends
take me home to where i belong
take me home, though the road is long
i'll make a bed of roses
lay me down in the grass
until i find myself in comfort
comfort at last
~book called "comfort"
FAKE PLASTIC TREES LYRICS(radiohead)
Her Green plastic watering can
For her fake chinese rubber plant
In fake plastic earth.
That she bought from a rubber man
In a town full of rubber plans.
Just to get rid of itself.
And It Wears Her Out, it wears her out
It wears her out, it wears her out.
She lives with a broken man
A cracked polystyrene man
Who just crumbles and burns.
He used to do surgery
For girls in the eighties
But gravity always wins.
And It Wears Him Out, it wears him out
It wears him out, it wears him out.
She looks like the real thing
She tastes like the real thing
My Fake Plastic Love.
But I can't help the feeling
I could blow through the ceiling
If I just turn and run
And It Wears Me Out, it wears me out
It wears me out, it wears me out.
And if I could BE who you wanted
If I could BE who you wanted,
All the time, all the time
outside.staind.
And you can bring me to my knees...Again
All the times when I could beg you please....In vain
All the times when I felt insecure....For you
And I leave my burdens at the door
But I'm on the outside
I'm looking in
I can see through you
See your true colors
Cos inside you're ugly
You're ugly like me
I can see through you
See to the real you
All the times that I felt like this won't end
Was from you
And I taste what I could never have
Its from you
All the times that I've tried
My intentions, full of pride
But I waste more time than anyone
But I'm on the outside
I'm looking in
I can see through you
See your true colors
Cos inside you're ugly
You're ugly like me
I can see through you
See to the real you
All the times that I've cried
All this wasted, it's all inside
And I feel, all this pain
I stuffed it down, it's back again
And I lie, here in bed
All alone, I can't mend
But I feel, tomorrow will be okay
But I'm on the outside
And I'm looking in
I can see through you
See your true colors
Cos inside you're ugly
You're ugly like me
I can see through you
See to the real you
- Last seen on Nov 26 11:25 AM. Member since December 26, 2004.
- I'm a pyrite eye poet for 1014 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "now i'm an amputee god damn you".
- I am a 16 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a giant half chicken half squirrel on tuesdays.
- Visit my homepage at emosong.ytmnd.com/



- I am in the groups A Shoulder To Cry On, Biblical and Christian Conversation, Girl Interrupted, Mt Dew, Teen Depression x, for the Love of Rock
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My Poetry
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life39 lines, 2 comments, April 16, 2007. In Life, Pain, Other, Personal, Sad, Death, Goodbyes, Dedication, Self, Depression
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all this time that you've been gone
I'm so glad you went away
28 lines, 3 comments, February 4, 2007. In Abuse, Dark, Thoughts, Pain, Hate, Anger, My life, Personal, My own style, Depression -
I went through one of those phases
"finding myself"
My Stories
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what was here before isnt my work and i dont know why it shows up on my author page
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nothing can change what happened and the past, and even though the wounds became scars i still have to look at the memories every time i see one of you. you might have only a f256 lines, November 16, 2005. In <200 lines, Depression
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Tipp on May 9, 2006Hello... just noticed you had me on your favorites, it's been awhile since I've been on here, so... how are you? great writing style keep it up
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XoxoJacindaXoxo on March 26, 2006Please read my newest poem " I'm Changing!!!" Please
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pointlessdayz on January 21, 2006hey... just thought i'd say hi and see if you would be willing to chat on AIM sometime... IM me if you ever feel like it...
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