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I don't claim to be the best. But I find that I am a better person than most. I try my best to lead a decent life, but as one of my best lady friends told me I'm at a disadvantage as I'm a man and all men are dogs.


I'm a 23 year old male. A Hospital corpsman stationed with the Marines for 3 years and now I'm on a ship...which sucks.

Anyway this is all you really need to know about me as you're not here for my story, and most likely not even here for my poetry.

If you stumble across me, I'm not the least bit sorry if you think I suck and you wasted your time. I write for me and me alone, and this site is just a way to archive my thoughts.



  • Last seen on Jul 12 9:48 PM. Member since August 30, 2004.
  • I'm a carnelian hope poet for 119 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Sarcasm, What a waste of lovely words.".
  • I am a 23 year old guy from Washington (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Sailor/Hospital Corpsman/Surgical Tech/ Helo EMT.
  • Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/theoriginaltoofastforlove
  • I have 119 comments, 1 addline

My Poetry

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  • Think before you Speak
    They hold these truths to be self evident
    But what does that even mean,
    19 lines, April 26. In Political
  • For you
    Stephanie....You'll always be my best friend....Love ya.
    0 lines, 2 comments, March 31
  • Losing Hand
    When I say I'm better than you I fucking Mean it, Don't even try to open your eyes your too blind to see it.
    29 lines, March 31
  • Sometimes
    Sometimes I find the time To grab my pen and Jot a rhyme
    21 lines, 1 comment, March 28

Visitor Book

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  • Lucky : hey you. on April 3
    write me a poem would ya?
  • Lucky on August 3, 2007
    hey babe.
    miss you bunches!
    hope your doing ok. I know that you've tried to call me, I got your messages, but every time you've called I've been away from my phone. I swear it. I started crying the last time I missed it. I do not work on mondays, tuesdays or wednesdays. so try me then.
    hope you get ahold of me.
    love always,
    steph

    p.s. how's married life treating you, I'm soon to follow that route.
  • Lucky on August 21, 2006
    screw you.

    Edited on Oct 29 because ''.
  • rustykylene on October 4, 2005
    hey you. you should call someone every now and again.

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