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Where The Ocean Meet's The Sky


Standing on the cliff's
Warmth of the sun on my face
A gentle mist of the ocean spray
Leaving it's mark where it hit's
Dolphin's out to play
And whale's hidden for the day
Bird's flying up above
Dipping low to catch their prey
Soaring high again on the wind
To find their place to stay
Boats drifting along
Going where the currents take them
While people enjoy the quiet serenity
And relaxing lull of the currents
Looking down you'll see ,
People walking , children playing
And surfer's riding the waves  
And as the day slowly comes to an end  
Nothing more beautiful will you see
The bright changing colors of the sky
While the sun goes down on the horizon
And the ocean meets the sky .
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  • on Nov 24 2006 10:35 AM
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    9/11

    I remember watching it on the tv, I felt for all the people in the planes and in the two towers. I lost an old friend in one of the tower's, Which made everything come even closer to home for me.
    Youve written the verse with the love that makes People Think! and Never forget the people who died that day. Thank you for let'ing me read such a great work.
    I must get around to reading more of your poetry.

    :THANK YOU;

    ########## The Warrior Poet ....
  • squirrell
    on Nov 21 2006 06:46 AM
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    hey

    hey thanks for then comment on my poem.. if you like that one then plz tell me of what you think of this one.. this was my original thought...

    http://allpoetry.com/poem/903330

    thx again
    S for SQUIRRELETTA
  • poeticweaver
    on Nov 20 2006 01:27 PM
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    Hello Sweet Soul!

    Thanks for taking the time to read me, and I want you to know how much I appreciate you, and your uplifting words. Keep on penning on, and sharing your wonderful works! Much love, Timothy x
  • chastity30
    on Apr 06 2006 11:15 AM
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    :-* ty hon

  • on Apr 06 2006 10:45 AM
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