hey yall can call matilda am 17 and in high school i have been writing poetry for a year and i have also been writing music. its just a way for me to be me lol. i was told about this site by my friend her account is poetrygurl04 she is really good (probably not as good as me just kidden) check her out. I would really appriciate it if other poets or writers critique my work
MY FAVORITE POEM :US by PHIL
Written with a pen
Sealed with a kiss
If you are my friend,
Please answer this:
Are we friends or are we not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
So tell me now and tell me true,
So I can say, I am here for you.
Of all the friends I've ever met,
you’re the ones I won't forget.
And if I die before you do,
I'll go to Heaven
and wait for you.
MY FAVORITE POEM :US by PHIL
Written with a pen
Sealed with a kiss
If you are my friend,
Please answer this:
Are we friends or are we not?
You told me once, but I forgot.
So tell me now and tell me true,
So I can say, I am here for you.
Of all the friends I've ever met,
you’re the ones I won't forget.
And if I die before you do,
I'll go to Heaven
and wait for you.
- Last seen on Oct 29 7:11 PM. Member since September 29, 2004.
- I'm a diamond love poet for 217 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "good job".
- I am a 17 year old girl (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a student.
- Visit my homepage at www.freewebs.com/desouzey/
- I have 217 comments, 1 addline, 1 column, 26 poems
My Poetry
-
these little things i know,
those are the thing that makes you mine23 lines, November 28, 2005. In Love -
our love will never die14 lines, 2 comments, November 25, 2005. In Love
Guest Book
1 - 4 of 12
Show all
-
sk8erboy on October 1, 2006hey! yeah...everything with my sis is really good. shes having a girl and she is due feb 10. but yeah...sup with u? how have u been?
-
Methuselah on October 21, 2005its been a while sorry Ive been busy with school and not much time for anything i will hopefully talk to you tonight
-
Methuselah on July 13, 2005You know sk8erboy/phil cool
me too
thanks for the message -
sk8erboy on June 6, 2005hey i miss you. hope to talk to u soon.
phil
