Hi, I'm Loren. I love writing poems. I have been doing it for a while now and it has changed a lot. But I have been writing "stories" since I was in the second grade. My stories are mostly magic related but my poems are mostly love and family life related. I mostly write to get things out. Emotions that I can't handle or that I don't want to. That is why most of my stuff is sad, about pain or guys. It is the easiest way for me to look at my problems from another point of view and helps me realize what I really think about something. I write mostly the truth although some of it is exaggerated or from other experiences.
I spend most of my time hanging out with friends (when I'm not grounded), reading/writing, or doing something outside. I can't stay inside too long, I get bored VERY easily.
My friend's think that I am very loud and too sweet to everybody. I guess I'm one of the "popular" kids at my high school but I don't just hang out with the other "popular" kids. If you want to be my friend than I want to be yours, no matter what you are, and I will defend you from anybody anytime.
My friend's say thats how I got so popular, for sticking up for all of my friends.
I have changed a lot in a short period of time. A close friend of mine killed himself recently and I promised him that I was going to change and I'm proud to say that I have. I'm less scared to go after things I want. I say w/e is on my mind while still trying to be an amazingly good friend to all of my friends. I take chances 24/7 and I will live my life to the fullest. No more regrets. I just wish others could see my new found self as a good thing.
These are some quotes. I think they are cool, but if you don't want to read them then scroll down and read my poems.
*Being mad is like going up a hill, you'll get over it.
*I'm not afraid of heights, I'm afraid of falling. I'm not scared of the dark, I'm scared of whats in it. I'm not afraid of love, I'm afraid of not being loved back.
*The dirty looks, the jealous stares, the best part is you think I care.
*Sometimes the person you fall in love with is not ready to catch you.
*A good friend will bail you out of jail, but a better friend will be sitting right beside you saying "Damn that was fun!"
*Someone asked me what I saw in you, my answer was everything.
*You don't die of a broken heart. You only wish you did.
*Holding on to something that used to be there hoping it will come back, knowing it won't.
*The only thing worse than a broken heart is knowing you'd give him another chance.
*So alone in this world full of pairs. Never good enough to be in one.
(by me)
* Sing like no one is listening, Dance like no one can see you, Live like heaven is on earth & Love like you've never been hurt.
*Forget the times he walked by, Forget the times he made you cry, Forget the times he spoke your name, Remember now your not the same. Forget the times he held your hand,, Forget the sweet things if you can. Forget the times and don't pretend, Remember now he is no longer your friend.
*I'm going to smile and make you think I'm happy. I'm going to laugh, so you don't see me cry. I'm going to let you go in style & even if it kills me - I'm going to smile.
*Life is a challenge, and only those who rise to the challenge truly know what it means to live.
*You said you loved me, I said it too. The only thing is I didn't lie to you.
*I don't miss you. I miss who I thought you were.
*A broken heart is like a broken mirror. It is better to keep it broken than to get hurt trying to fix it.
* Stand up for what you believe in, even if your standing alone.
*Everyone asks me don't you wish, don't you hope, don't you dream? And I reply yeah I used to........ until one day I met someone who made me wake up.
*Pain doesn't hurt ..........when its all you've ever felt.
*Walking away isn't the hard part, its knowing that you won't come running after me that hurts the most.
*"She said if we're gonna make this work, you gotta let me inside even though it hurts...don't hide the broken parts that i need to see, like it or not it's the way it's gotta be. you gotta love yourself if you can ever love me..."
-from "whatever it takes" - by lifehouse
*Immature love says, "I love you because I need you." Mature love says, "I need you because I love you. Franklin D. Roosevelt
*Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself. George Bernard Shaw
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I spend most of my time hanging out with friends (when I'm not grounded), reading/writing, or doing something outside. I can't stay inside too long, I get bored VERY easily.
My friend's think that I am very loud and too sweet to everybody. I guess I'm one of the "popular" kids at my high school but I don't just hang out with the other "popular" kids. If you want to be my friend than I want to be yours, no matter what you are, and I will defend you from anybody anytime.
My friend's say thats how I got so popular, for sticking up for all of my friends.
I have changed a lot in a short period of time. A close friend of mine killed himself recently and I promised him that I was going to change and I'm proud to say that I have. I'm less scared to go after things I want. I say w/e is on my mind while still trying to be an amazingly good friend to all of my friends. I take chances 24/7 and I will live my life to the fullest. No more regrets. I just wish others could see my new found self as a good thing.
These are some quotes. I think they are cool, but if you don't want to read them then scroll down and read my poems.
*Being mad is like going up a hill, you'll get over it.
*I'm not afraid of heights, I'm afraid of falling. I'm not scared of the dark, I'm scared of whats in it. I'm not afraid of love, I'm afraid of not being loved back.
*The dirty looks, the jealous stares, the best part is you think I care.
*Sometimes the person you fall in love with is not ready to catch you.
*A good friend will bail you out of jail, but a better friend will be sitting right beside you saying "Damn that was fun!"
*Someone asked me what I saw in you, my answer was everything.
*You don't die of a broken heart. You only wish you did.
*Holding on to something that used to be there hoping it will come back, knowing it won't.
*The only thing worse than a broken heart is knowing you'd give him another chance.
*So alone in this world full of pairs. Never good enough to be in one.
(by me)
* Sing like no one is listening, Dance like no one can see you, Live like heaven is on earth & Love like you've never been hurt.
*Forget the times he walked by, Forget the times he made you cry, Forget the times he spoke your name, Remember now your not the same. Forget the times he held your hand,, Forget the sweet things if you can. Forget the times and don't pretend, Remember now he is no longer your friend.
*I'm going to smile and make you think I'm happy. I'm going to laugh, so you don't see me cry. I'm going to let you go in style & even if it kills me - I'm going to smile.
*Life is a challenge, and only those who rise to the challenge truly know what it means to live.
*You said you loved me, I said it too. The only thing is I didn't lie to you.
*I don't miss you. I miss who I thought you were.
*A broken heart is like a broken mirror. It is better to keep it broken than to get hurt trying to fix it.
* Stand up for what you believe in, even if your standing alone.
*Everyone asks me don't you wish, don't you hope, don't you dream? And I reply yeah I used to........ until one day I met someone who made me wake up.
*Pain doesn't hurt ..........when its all you've ever felt.
*Walking away isn't the hard part, its knowing that you won't come running after me that hurts the most.
*"She said if we're gonna make this work, you gotta let me inside even though it hurts...don't hide the broken parts that i need to see, like it or not it's the way it's gotta be. you gotta love yourself if you can ever love me..."
-from "whatever it takes" - by lifehouse
*Immature love says, "I love you because I need you." Mature love says, "I need you because I love you. Franklin D. Roosevelt
*Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself. George Bernard Shaw
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- Last seen on Oct 6 11:33 AM. Member since June 1, 2006.
- I'm a malachite opening poet for 438 comments.
- My mood is , and quote is "Its impossible to find a guy that won't hurt you, go for the guy who will make the pain worthwhile.".
- I am a 18 year old girl from Georgia (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm in love with a man named Travis!.
- I am in the groups A Group for people who like to randomly stare at people just to freak them out, All Those Against Gay Murder, Broken Hearted, I Want To Fly But I Cant Reach The Sky For Those Who Want To Publish Their Work, Rockers Anonymous, Those That Write From Experience
- I have 438 comments, 3 contests
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A very personal and painful poem. Had a bad night.
Boydamaged and cutting -
When I started writing this, I didn't even have this idea in mind. But this is how it turned out and I think its pretty good. Tell me what
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just a lil something I came up with.
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vergessen Sie mich on June 25hi, you commented on one of my poems a while back(it's called "Remember"), so thanx. btw, i love the quotes.
i hope to remember them all!!! where in the world did you find them anyway??????????? 
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After the Twilight on May 5Hello! Im not sure if you remember from quite a while ago... but I used to be Red Satan. I've just got back on the site again (yay!). drop by and say hi if you remember!
Kas
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beautifulxlie23 : thanks on March 3thanks for your imput on my poem. no i really didn't do any of that, i wrote about it instead. i love writing and i really want to publish my writing everywhere but i am not sure how to do it. i was hoping my contests would show up on stuff like that. that's really the only thing i know how to write about!! thanks for letting me enter!! i enjoyed it very much!!!!!!!
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Pisces Pieces on February 27I LOVE your quotes!!! Words to live by! ♥
I will read some of your poetry later this evening at work...right now, I have to go get ready for work
(I saw your contest so came to check out your profile)
Michele
