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  • jackreed3
    Feb 15 11:14 AM
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    The tree of life.. shall make us strive..

  • MidasSwell
    August 31 ↑
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    The tree of life.. shall make us strive..

    Does all our strife

    Make us more alive?

  • jackreed3
    October 26 ↑
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    Yes I Have two metephores in one line.

    The tree of Life shall make us strive
    meaning we as humans live without them.. It hurts us Killing trees for no
    reason. Hurts the planet too.

    It was only a one line poetry contests... JackReed3

    • just mercedes
      October 27 ↑
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      metaphors?

      Actually, the Tree of Life is an archaic symbol rather than a metaphor.

      And there is no metaphor in 'shall make us strive' that I can find.

      So I guess you didn't win the contest?
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