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im new to this whole poetry thing. i just completed my first piece and im still tryna gradually grow.
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Hey there! I hope you enjoy your stay.
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Yep, welcome!
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if you'd said 'trying to gradually grow'
you'd be good already
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Uh oh! There's a split infinitive there. Have you been to Switzerland?
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they wouldn't let me in!
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haha! thanks for the tip polly filla! LOL! i'll remember that next time
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don't try an' listen to me, tho'...seriously
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Hi! Welcome to AP! Have fun writing stuff!

louiskinnaird
Sep 10 1:47 PM
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